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What's next?

A hypertext narrative by

Kevin Chavez

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Word count: 2125

Choice count: 34

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 30 matches (answer, case, charge, Clinical, complaint, conscience, contact, criminal, criminology, evidence, family, force, guilty, interrogation, misconduct, murder, notice, offer, order, poison, premium, private, record, register, road, Sexual, surprise, truth, waste, young)

Tourism : 28 matches (Airport, Alcohol, Ceremony, City, Delegate, Employee, Extra, Hotel, Plane, Program, Restaurant, US, airport, bit, charge, chef, course, door, field, hotel, program, register, single, stop, times, to visit, watch, weather)

Psychology : 24 matches (alcohol, bit, cell, class, conscience, dream, drive, family, field, focus, happiness, learning, love, need, order, pain, patient, phone, register, remember, run, sleep, snow, thinking)

Target Structure:

HR (1 match)

maddening (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

OJT (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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What's next?

It all started like this.

It was the end of the semester and yes, this is it. Finally I'm graduating from Ahuntsic College. After all this hard work, pain, and sleepless night I'm finally having my diploma but what should I do next?

Choice 1 : Continue my studies in criminology at University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : Give myself a break and take a sabbatical semester.

Graduation

No time for break!

After one yearn this program I'm having so much fun learning and studying in a field that passionate me and I meet a girl in one of my classes who share the same energy as for this field. She is kinda cute maybe she's single, should I ask her out for a date or for a study night or should I just focus on my path and just walk away?

Choice 1 : Stay focus on my path.

Choice 2 : Ask her for a date.

Distraction

The right choice.

Even if I really like this girl I decide to stay focus on my studies and now I'm grateful for making that choice because I'm graduating this week! Finally after 3 years of hard work and having straight A's I'm having my diploma. However, I'm not sure on what I'm doing next. At my graduation ceremony I meet this New York police department delegate who offers me a job as an investigator for the NY PD as a result of my good grades.

Choice 1 : Accept the job.

Choice 2 : Refuse the job.

ceremony

Welcome to New York.

I accepted the job and now I'm an investigator for the New York Police department. Is a dream come true to live in New York. Even if I'm kilometers away from my family and friends I'm ready to focus on my career. On my first case, I'm called to investigate in the murder of a young woman who came from Quebec. The chief of the department gives me the choice to take it or leave it because the young woman who was murderer was Sarah Couture, the girl who was sit next to my on my first semester, the same girl with who I almost felt in love.

Choice 1 : Take the case.

Choice 2 : Leave the case.

NYPD

Who killed Sara Couture?

After a long reflexion, I decided to take the case and investigate on Sara's murder. Her friend Clara found his body in their hotel room. She was poisoned with rat poison mixed with alcohol. The police interrogates Clara who was the first suspect, and she told that Sara and her were in New York just to visit the city. It was the first time for Sara in New York, she always dreamed to visit the city. She never could visit it before because she promised Clara that they will visit the city together and since Clara was studying in France, she waited for her until she came back. All this history start to feel a little heavy on my head. Should I continue the investigation?

Choice 1 : Yes don't give up.

Choice 2 : No take a step back from the case.

Insomnia

Second chance.

I decide to continue the investigation for Sara's family. They deserve to know what really happen to her and it's my first case, they will be worse cases than this one. Looking in to his phone records, we notice that a private number was calling her at many times. We ask Clara if she knows something about it, and she told us that Sara was frequently harassed by one man at his job, but she never mentioned his name because she was very scared. Should I go investigate at his job in Montreal or should I just follow his phones record to find the person who's calling her?

Choice 1 : Go investigate to Montreal.

Choice 2 : Investigate on the private number.

Investigation

Back to Montreal.

My boss got the permission from the chef of the "SPVM" the police department of Montreal, to send me and investigate on Sara's murder. I didn't waste my time and directly take my plane to Montreal. Sara was working as a clinical criminologist at a psychiatric hospital. I remember when I was his friend she was always talking about her passion for mental issues. I guess she finally founded the perfect work for her. When I arrive at the airport of Montreal a big snow storm was on his way. Should I visit my family and wait until the weather it's good to drive or should I go directly to the hospital who was a bit far from the airport?

Choice 1 : Go to the hospital.

Choice 2 : Visit your family.

snow

Bad decision.

There's no time to waist, my first case need to be done quickly to impress my boss and who knows, maybe I can find Sara's killer. On my way to the hospital, the snow fall is so intense that I can barely see the road when suddenly a dear appear out of nowhere and trying to avoid it I get out of the road and fall on a river. The way I fell on the river was so hard that I lost conscience and can't get out in time to survive.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

accident

Time for a break!

I decide to take a break from school and now I'm working and earning a wage. It's amazing, I never feel as free as I feel right now. School start to feel maddening for me. I'm so happy I take this decision. I work as a manager assistant for a restaurant and I just finish my OJT. My boss asks me if I'm ready to take in charge a trainee and of course I said yes. When I meet the new employee I realize it was one of my friends. Should I tell my boss?

Choice 1 : Tell my boss.

Choice 2 : Keep the secret.

restaurant

No secrets.

I finally decided to tell the truth and my boss is very happy I didn't get sucked up in and take this situation responsibly. The next week my boss tell me that my friend didn't get the job because of misconduct. I was happy I didn't get involved. I start working hard and harder until times in order to make a choice. Should I leave my work as I planned and continue studying or should I continue working?

Choice 1 : Leave work.

Choice 2 : Continue work.

time

Money can't buy happiness.

It's been one year since I started working for this restaurant and I'm always on time, never called sick and always on my duties and my boss always put me aside even if I pull off any situation. I'm just trying to have my premium wage for all these overtimes a did the last two months. I should leave as I planned now I'm exhausted and doing extra work more often than not. What should I do next? Change job or fight for my money?

Choice 1 : Change job.

Choice 2 : Fight for your money.

sad

Sorry wrong number!

I decided to ask her number, so we could talk about our "program". I'm so stressed I never run behind a girl like this. Finally, I decided to call and a guy answer the phone telling me he was his boyfriend. I'm so devastated I really thought this would work out. I don't want to come to class anymore.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

heartbreak

Can't find a job!

I applied in everywhere and still can't have a call back. It has been almost 8 months since I graduated. I Refuse the job as an investigator in New York because I don't want to be far away from my family and friends. I feel like I made a big mistake I should have said yes for the job.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

sad

Regrets.

You decided to leave the case and now you couldn't stop thinking about it. You can't sleep and you are not well-starting your new job.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

Insomnia

Alex Smith.

Trying to find new evidence we finally made it and found the owner of the private phone number. His name was Alex Smith. Alex was previously a patient of a psychiatric hospital in Quebec. My boss proposes to go investigate since I really know the city. Should I accept or decline the offer?

Choice 1 : Accept

Choice 2 : Decline

Investigation

After snow the good time.

It's good to be back with my family. After 4 months I'm back but no for long time. The next day, the storm is over and I'm ready to restart my investigation. When I arrive and inform the employees about Sara's murder they are devastated. One of the employees approach me and tell me she knows who killed her. His name was Alex Smith, and he was obsessed by Sara. He recently gets out of the hospital even if Sara and her recommended to sending Alex to a psychiatric center. Alex was at the hospital because he hurt himself when he tried to kill his brother. The story affected so much Sara that she decide to take a break and visit New York. Alex was sexual harassing Sara all the period he was in. What should I do next? Go after Alex or inform the New York Police department about Alex?

Choice 1 : Go after Alex.

Choice 2 : Inform the New York Police Department.

hospital

The killer.

I'm back to New York and after an investigation I found where Alex is staying. I go after him and when I arrived I hear a woman yelling. I immediately force the door and I found Alex on the bed with a woman. He didn't move he just stare at me surprise. The woman say my name and I realize it was Clara who was next to Alex. I can't believe what I'm looking at. Clara grab her purse and grab a gun and told me that I wasn't supposed to discover the truth. Sara was always talking about Alex and Clara never understood why she didn't like Alex. He is a handsome man and everything Clara dreams of in a man. The only way for her to have him was killing Sara and inviting Alex to New York. She is ready to do everything for him, and she shot.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

scene crime

The guilty.

I inform the New York police department about Alex, and they quickly found where he was staying. Surprise surprise, when they found him he was with a woman, and the woman was Clara, Sara's friend. After an investigation and an interrogation Clara admits that she was behind everything. She was in love with Alex and really jealous about Sara, even if she didn't want anything with this criminal. She invited Alex to New York and send him a cell phone with the Sara's number on it. Her plan was to kill her and blame everything on Alex, knowing he was diagnostic with mental issues he would probably end in a psychiatric center and end will be out in a year or two. Clara is now in prison for Sara Couture's murder. I'm glad this case is over. Ready for the next case.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again

jail

No new job.

I quit my job but I really have problems finding another job. I start feeling depressed for letting school on the side and I'm really sad for my situation.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again.

sad

Give me my money.

After my boss refuse to pay me I had no choice but contact the HR and make an official complaint. It's been more than 5 months now and it's almost time to get back to school. After 2 weeks I finally got all my money but what should I do next? Change job or get back to school?

Choice 1 : Change job

Choice 2 : Get back to school

justice

Bad start.

I decide to keep the secret but it was a bad idea. I didn't see my friend in 5 years, and he's not the same person that I used to know. While he was on my responsibility he got the bad idea to steal the money from the cash register. I didn't realize what he did until my boss notice me. He accuses us just because he was my responsibility to watch him and fire us.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning and star again.

sad