Future Doctor in the Making.

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Océanne Martin

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Word count: 1160

Choice count: 44

Section count: 0

Image count: 27

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 27 matches (School, choice, class, classes, college, course, diploma, don, exam, failed, failing, field, first, graduate, homework, learning, management, options, private, report, school, skills, social, social skills, student, university, writing)

Nursing : 16 matches (clinic, cold, Doctor, environment, hospital, indigestion, media, medical, medicine, physician, play, position, sleep, social, sick, patients)

Computer Science : 15 matches (application, budget, call, choice, Class, close, depth, don't care, environment, field, privacy, Private, skip, sleep, traffic)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (1 match)

in-depth (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (7 matches)

lack of (2 matches)

more often than not (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

overwhelm (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (2 matches)

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Future Doctor in the Making.

College days are over.

I just graduated from college and now I have to decide which university I want to go to.

Choice 1 : McGill University is a great English School.

Choice 2 : Sherbrooke University has a 4 years program for medicine instead of 5 amazing!

Choice 3 : Montreal University : boring but it is easy to get in

Khayman [CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)]

McGill University.

Going to English School is way harder than I expected...

Choice 1 : I should take fewer classes and focus on my English

Choice 2 : I have to keep pushing.With time management I will get there. No one ever said it was easy to be a doctor

paytonc [CC BY 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/2.0)]

Sherbrooke University.

Sherbrooke is far from Montreal, I need to move there.

Choice 1 : I need to find an apartment close to the school

Choice 2 : I'll apply for the student housing

abdallahh from Montréal, Canada [CC BY 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/2.0)]

Finding an Apartment.

All the good options are taken my budget doesn't allow me to spend a lot on the rent I'm a broke student... I should have chosen the student housing now it's too late I'm in trouble.

Choice 1 : Student housing was the best option for me

Mariamariana19141915 [CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)]

Student Housing.

My request was accepted ! They asked me if I want to have a roommate or a private room...

Choice 1 : It's more expensive but I prefer privacy

Choice 2 : Of course I want a roommate I have no friends in Sherbrooke

LHOON from Mechelen, Belgium [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)]

Private Room.

Did I really think my broke student budget could afford a private room?

Choice 1 : Apply for a room with a roommate

Free Clip Art [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)]

Roommate.

My roommate is extra weird... She looks at me while I'm sleeping and takes my stuff without asking me.

Choice 1 : I wished I had chosen another university.

Choice 2 : Well some people lack of social skills but it's alright I can deal with that, stay in this room

Cabichuela [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)]

Voodoo Doll.

While you were sleeping she made a voodoo doll with the hairs she collected on your stuff. She controls your life.

Choice 1 : Start over

Malcolm Lidbury (aka Pinkpasty) [CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)]

Diploma.

I finally graduated from med school I'm a proud doctor.I will start working at the hospital tomorrow.

Choice 1 : I should celebrate with friends I've finally graduated

Choice 2 : I'll go to bed early, tomorrow is a big day patients deserve the best.

Swampyank at English Wikipedia [CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)]

Bye Bye Doctor Career.

I didn't take enough classes I didn't meet the criteria I didn't graduate from med school. I'll have a dead-end job for the rest of my life.

Choice 1 : Start over

Videoplasty.com [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)]

Internship.

I'm so proud I didn't give up. It wasn't always easy but I've been able to pull off straight a's. I made it to the internship.

Choice 1 : choose an internship in the public field

Choice 2 : choose an internship in the private field

tsca [Public domain]

Late.

I partied too much last night I'm so hangover and I woke up late.

Choice 1 : Run to work they won't notice. Hospitals are always so busy.

Choice 2 : Call sick and tell them you have an indigestion

Álvaro Canivell [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)]

First Day.

Everyone on the medical team is really sweet with me. I'm learning the ropes of my new work environment.

Choice 1 : I'm happy I decided to become a doctor I feel accomplish

Bill Branson (Photographer) [Public domain]

Run to Work.

The nurses and patients were waiting for me. My boss fired me in front of everyone. It is my first and last day.

Choice 1 : Maybe calling sick would have been a better idea after all

dnak [CC BY 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/2.0)]

Call Sick.

They saw my pictures on Instagram and my boss knows I have a hangover she gives me a warning.

Choice 1 : I should have gone to bed early

CDC [Public domain]

Public field.

Being an intern is great I'm learning so much.

Choice 1 : My internship is over

Choice 2 : My experience is so great I should volunteer and get more experience

Norbert Kaiser [CC BY-SA 2.5 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5)]

Private field.

The work environment in this private clinic is nice and there is a vacant position.

Choice 1 : Even if there's a vacant position I have to focus on my internship report

Choice 2 : I'll write my resume and hand it out

The Medical Futurist editors. [CC BY 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0)]

Volunteer.

I decided to volunteer in South Africa. It's the best place in the world I feel so useful I will never come back to the cold of Quebec.

Choice 1 : Start over

PIERRE ANDRE LECLERCQ [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)]

Student Housing.

Student housing is amazing! Comes in handy to be able to skip the morning traffic. I met new people in the Art program.They keep inviting me to go party with them.

Choice 1 : No I can't put aside my homework. I need to stay focus

Choice 2 : Med student can have fun too. LET'S PARTY

Soulmwandi [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)]

Montreal Traffic.

Montreal traffic is crazy and more often than not I'm late to my classes.

Choice 1 : Apply for student housing it's only 2 minutes away from school

Choice 2 : Wake up earlier and avoid the traffic

Photography by: Osvaldo Gago [CC BY-SA 2.5 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5)]

Lack of sleep.

I didn't think about that option in-depth. Now I'm so tired when I get to class I can't focus. I forget the basics like the names of the bones and muscles. I'm failing all of my exams.

Choice 1 : I wished I had chosen the student housing

Quinn Dombrowski from Chicago, USA [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)]

Party Time.

I'm having so much fun at this party everybody is dancing and plays drinking game.

Choice 1 : I have to play too

Choice 2 : Dancing is my favorite

Agitadas Oficial from Brasil [CC BY 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/2.0)]

Overwhelm.

I have been working overtime and studying so much I am exhausted.

Choice 1 : It is not too late to accept to go to a party after all. I will call my friend and go

Choice 2 : Medicine program is really hard I have to stay focus and keep studying

martinak15 from Pennsylvania- United States [CC BY 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/2.0)]

Drinking Game.

Someone added drugs to my drink I'm puking everywhere. People are taking pictures of me. I might have just ruined my chance of becoming a physician if this ends up on social media. I wished I stayed home.

Choice 1 : Now that I think about it dance would have been a better idea

Choice 2 : Student Housing.

Usien [CC0]

Dancing.

This party is great. The student life is way better than people think. Or maybe not I just remembered I have an exam tomorrow.

Choice 1 : I have to leave the party and study before bed

Choice 2 : Dancing is more fun I don't care about the exam

The people from the Tango! project [Public domain]

Exam.

I was so tired all I could think about was my dance moves I failed my exam.

Choice 1 : The end

Michael D Beckwith [CC0]

Application.

The boss saw me writing my resume instead of taking care of my patients and told me I have to be more responsible if I want to succeed my internship.

Choice 1 : She's right I have to focus more on my internship if I want to save people's life in the future

U.S. Department of AgricultureBob Nichols/Photographer/Office of Communications-Photography Services Center [Public domain]