Help Me to Choose My Future.

A hypertext narrative by

Valerie Vaugeois

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Word count: 1006

Choice count: 29

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 18 matches (agent, arrested, assault, crime, dogs, driving, harassment, homicide, minutes, office, pension, police officer, prostitution, protocol, sexual assault, Sexual, street, warning)

Police-Technology : 10 matches (appear, badge, crime, detective, investigations, police, police officer, RCMP, SPVM, SQ)

Education : 8 matches (choice, college, don, first, learn, technology, trainee, training)

Target Structure:

fulfillment (1 match)

invaluable (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

leg work (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

pension (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

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Help Me to Choose My Future.

I just graduated Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

I now have to choose where I want to go. Do I want to be a police officer or an STM agent?

Choice 1 : Police officer.

Choice 2 : STM agent.

Ahuntsic College

Police officer.

I now have to choose if I want to work in Quebec or in Canada. Do I go to Nicolet to become a Quebec police officer or do I go work for the Canadian police (RCMP)? I can't choose. Help me please!

Choice 1 : Nicolet.

Choice 2 : RCMP.

Police officer

STM agent.

Today is my first day. I am warning someone when suddenly, someone pushes me in the metro line. I don't have time to get up and I get hit by a train. I am dead.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

Metro station.

Nicolet.

After Nicolet, I have to choose where I want to go to work. Because I want to work in a big police department, I am hesitating between the Montreal Police Department (SPVM) and the provincial police (SQ). Where should I go?

Choice 1 : I go work for the SPVM.

Choice 2 : I go work for the SQ.

Nicolet

RCMP.

I have to choose between British Columbia and Nunavut. Both of them are so far from home. Where should I go?

Choice 1 : British Colombia.

Choice 2 : Nunavut.

Choice 3 : Go back to Nicolet.

RCMP

British Colombia.

After a few years, I find the love of my life, and he wants to go back in Quebec. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go back to Quebec with him.

Choice 2 : Stay in British Colombia.

British Colombia

Nunavut.

After a year in Nunavut, I start to miss the heat. This morning, I was doing my shift when suddenly, a polar bear appeared. He decided to chase me. After a few minutes, he caught me and ate me. I died.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

Polar bear

Go back to Quebec with him.

While we are going back, our plane has a problem and crashes. I die.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

plane crash

Stay in British Colombia.

I decided to stay in British Colombia, but my heart is broken. I feel so lost! I'm sad. Maybe a little surfing session at Tofino will help me smile again.

Choice 1 : Go surfing.

broken heart

SPVM.

After a few job interviews, I am finally hired by the SPVM. They ask me where I would like to go to work. I am hesitating between Montreal-North, where there are a lot of street gangs, and Hochelaga-Maisonneuve, where there is prostitution. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Montreal-North.

Choice 2 : Hochelaga-Maisonneuve.

SPVM

SQ.

It has been now 8 years that I'm a police officer for the SQ. It's time for a change. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go be a detective.

Choice 2 : Go work for the K9 with the dogs.

Surete du QUebec

Montreal-North.

I am now a trainee in the station. An older officer is showing how to work, so I could learn the ropes. On my second day of on-the-job-training, a few seconds after our shift ends, we hear a shooting. Should we go see what is happening?

Choice 1 : We go see what is happening.

Choice 2 : We ignore what is happening because it's gonna be on overtime.

Montreal North

Hochelaga-Maisonneuve.

After 30 years of service, I decide to retire. I have a good pension and I have a felling of fulfillment for all the work I have accomplished. After all these years of leg work, I can finally relax and enjoyed my retirement.

Write a choice here.

hochelaga-maisonneuve

We go see what is happening.

My partner and I rush to see what is happening. When I get out of the car, I receive and ball in my chest. There is so much going on that nobody can help me. After a few minutes, I die.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

spvm car

We ignore what is happening.

The next day, my boss wants to see me. He tells me that my partner and I fired because we didn't go to help our colleague, and we didn't respect the protocol. I'm overwhelmed and I don't know what to do. I don't have the energy to find another job. For the next years, I stayed home doing nothing and die of boredom.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

gravestone

Surfing.

On my day off, I decide to go surfing at Tofino. Suddenly, a big wave appear and I fall in the water. I can't get out of the ocean because of the wave and I drown. I am dead.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

surfing

Go be a detective.

I am now a detective. I have to choose if I want to work for the homicide or for the sexual crime. Both are very interesting. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Homicide.

Choice 2 : Sexual crime.

loupe

Go work for the K9 with the dogs.

It's my first day of formation. It's the first time that I will see my dog and I'm very excited. I am driving to the office and it's very icy. Suddenly, my car slides on the ice and I hit another car. The impact was so intense that I died a few minutes after.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

k9

Homicide.

It's been 5 years since I'm a detective for the homicide. I'm tired of seeing dead bodies. I want to change for the sexual crime.

Choice 1 : Go work for the sexual crime.

crane

Sexual crime.

It's been 23 years since I started to work for the sexual crime. I did many investigations and arrested many criminals that did sexual harassment and sexual assault. It's now time for me to give up my badge and to retire. I am really happy of the life I lived. It's invaluable. Thanks for helping me choose!

Choice 1 : If you want to try again, click here.

retirement