My CSTJ end.

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Ethienne Sanche

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Word count: 1171

Choice count: 27

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 3

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 20 matches (Pierre, School, campus, choice, class, college, course, courses, don, exam, fail, failure, first, learn, mark, reader, school, semester, student, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 19 matches (absence, bias, Cause, close, club, construction, dismiss, family, four, government, harassment, House, month, parent, rent, residence, schedule, Sexual, volunteer)

Computer Science : 16 matches (bias, choice, Class, close, failure, mark, parent, period, Pick, projection, reader, restart, search, sleep, swap, view)

Target Structure:

bias (1 match)

cursory (1 match)

leave of absence (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

though (2 matches)

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My CSTJ end.

Registration.

Today, It's my college registration. I am not sure between two programs. The first is Natural Science in Mont-Laurier campus with all my best friends or the second choice is composite materials technical in another city with some friends.

Choice 1 : Composite materials technical.

Choice 2 : Natural Science.

Natural Science.

I am accepted! At the start of the semester, I have fun. I am with my friends of Mont-Laurier. At Mont-Laurier, every month, he had a college party. In the middle semester exam period another one party is schedule. However, I have an exam tomorrow. In this course, I don't have a good mark, but I very wanted to go with my friends.

Choice 1 : Go to the party.

Choice 2 : Study for the exam.

Go to the party.

More often than not, I decide to go to the party, I have so fun. I talk with everyone and I dance like Michael Jackson, but the most important, I drink and drink again. At the end of the party, I am not able to walk and I throw up. I go sleep. The next day, it's my exam. I am a so hangover. I am not able to concentrate. I decide not to go to the exam and I didn't get a success to this course. This failure adds me one semester in this program. So, I decide to take “leave of absence” of the school for the rest of the semester and I start pick up cans to swap them for money. I am not happy.

Choice 1 : Cry and restart

Study for the exam.

I refuse to go to the party with my friends. I study all the night for my exam. The next day, I do my exam easily, but I still don't like what I do in this program. I quit the college and I start the work I have so long bias. I pick up cans to swap them for money.

Choice 1 : Cry and restart

Composite materials technical.

I am accepted! I must choose three of my friend to go in residence of CSTJ.

Choice 1 : Pierre, Felix, and Joey.

Pierre, Felix, and Joey.

I receive my confirmation to be in residence with Pierre, Felix, Joey, Marek and Felix the other. I don't know what to do between go to an apartment alone or go in residence with five other people.

Choice 1 : Go in an apartment.

Choice 2 : Go in residence with five other people.

Go in an apartment.

I rent an apartment. It is a cursory because after some months, even with all the overtime at my job, I can't pay anymore my apartment. I return to my parent's house at Mont-Laurier and leave the college.

Choice 1 : Cry and restart

Go in residence with five other people.

I decide to go with these people. They are all funny. I start my first year of the technical in the next week.

Choice 1 : First year of the technical.

First year of the technical.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Study and cross-country team

Choice 2 : Party three times a week

Mark.

All of my courses are a success. My average is over of 25 percent than the average of the class.

Choice 1 : Second year of the technical.

Second year of the technical.

I start my second year of the technical with a big smile because I have liked the past year. This year, He has composite material's laboratory. I am so excited to begin. The first semester of the year is fun. I build a skate in carbon fiber and other nice stuff. The second semester, we start to learn projection. I though it's the worst course in two years. I think left the technical for course like this to go work on the construction or in a manufacture.

Choice 1 : Go work.

Choice 2 : Third year of the technical.

Go work.

I start work in a manufacture. The first three months is good. I make new friends and I like the job. However, after six months, I hate my job and I view all of my friends left. One is a volunteer in the army, the other is dismiss cause of sexual harassment and all other are just bored with the job. So, I decide to leave.

Choice 1 : Cry and restart

Third year of the technical.

My third year is the most difficult in any point, but it's my favorite year. I really like the industrial Engineering courses. I decide to continue my way in this program, but I don't know between university or college.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Go in another technical.

Go to university.

I am accepted at ETS. It's a big Engineering University in Montreal. I start the semester. I am taken in a student club. I make new friends. After my first exam failure, I start put aside the school. I fail all of my exams, and I am pull off of my student club. I though I am not done to be an engineer and I leave the university. I have two choice for my future, go to college or go work.

Choice 1 : Go work.

Choice 2 : Go in another technical.

Go in another technical.

I decide to send a registration to go in College Lionel-Groulx in February. Before I have my response, the COVID-19 pandemic spreads on earth. I don't receive my response in April. I don't know if I am accepted or not. Should I go work in a manufacture of essential service or wait for my response?

Choice 1 : Go work.

Choice 2 : Go at Lionel-Groulx.

Go at Lionel-Groulx.

I finally accepted. I must search an apartment with my girlfriend nearby Mirabel.

Choice 1 : Apartment Mirabel.

Apartment Mirabel.

I see a lot of apartment, but they are expensive or very crapped. I will be obliged to choose one of them before the first of July.

Write a choice here.

Expensive apartment.

When we start, we are so happy. We have a beautiful apartment to invite family and friends. After four months, we are lost on the drive of work because we don't have enough cash to pay the rent. We do it until July first. After we don't rent for another year.

Choice 1 : Cry and restart

Crap apartment.

We go to the crap apartment. When we start put our thing and paint at our choice, we really like the apartment. We are very happy, and ready to start the next college year.

Choice 1 : Start at the new college.

Start at the new college.

After two weeks of college, the Government of Quebec close College again for the COVID-19. We are so sad. We are expected that since the beginning of the summer.

Choice 1 : Run to avoid COVID-19 and restart