The Next Step

A hypertext narrative by

Albert Gauvin

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Word count: 1073

Choice count: 31

Section count: 20

Image count: 18

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 18 matches (answer, arrest, close, court, fact, House, interest, joint, minutes, misconduct, offer, office, order, section, short title, street, title, volunteer)

Education : 14 matches (School, choice, class, college, course, failed, failing, field, first, high school, management, reader, school, teacher)

Psychology : 13 matches (class, drive, field, hit, joint, need, order, phone, reason, risk, sleep, stress, thinking)

Target Structure:

getting sucked up in (1 match)

income (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (2 matches)

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The Next Step

It all started like this.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : I go to Ahuntsic college in a field related to business

Choice 2 : I go to Grasset college for the same reason.

Ahuntsic college.

Ever since I am at Ahuntsic College, I hate my life. I used to enjoy school back in high school, but I am no longer getting straight a's. I failed every exams I had since the beginning. I now need to take a big decision.

Choice 1 : I quit and stay at home for a while.

Choice 2 : I keep on trying because failing is a part of everyone's life.

Staying at home.

Ever since I have been staying at my house, I have been enjoying my free days. Obviously I have no income from the lack of work. My parents keep telling me to get a job, but I am slowly getting sucked up in a lazy circle of life. My cousin Tony is calling at the moment. Do I answer? Do I go back to sleep?

Choice 1 : Answering Tony's phone call.

Choice 2 : Going back to sleep.

Answering Tony's phone call.

Tony asked me to enter is sketchy business. He is offering me a vacant position. He is telling me that if I have good time management, I could pull off ten thousand dollars every week. If I enter right now, he will give me a thousand dollars right away.

Choice 1 : I accepted the offer

Choice 2 : I turned off the offer.

I entered Tony's business.

It has been two months since I have been working with Tony. At first, I didn't I was going to be the guy that break other people's leg.The drive of work have been making me a crazy amount of money. I would consider myself having a vacant position in Tony's business. Since it is pretty though to brake legs for my mind, I need to take a life changing decision. Do I keep making this big amount of money in this business with the risk of going to jail or do I stop and go back to my old life.

Choice 1 : I keep doing my job.

Choice 2 : I go back to my old life.

I keep my job in Tony's business.

I was still doing the same stuff every day. Once Tony had a different type of job that was sketchier than braking legs. He had nobody to do hit for him. Do I volunteer? Should I say no?

Choice 1 : I said yes.

Choice 2 : I said no.

I volunteered.

The job was to go kill someone in Tony's business. I told myself I had to do it because it was Tony's office politics to do what he says. Arriving on the scene I was trying to put aside my stress. Should I kill him? Should I let him live?

Choice 1 : I shot the guy.

Choice 2 : I let him live.

I killed him.

After I killed him, it was an instant regret. Ten minutes later, the cops arrived in order to arrest me. I was going to go to jail for the rest of my life. It was the worst decision I had ever took.

Write a choice here.

I decided to go to Grasset College.

It was my first class at Grasset College and right next to me was sitting a really smart guy. I asked myself if I should go and talk to him. Since we were in a Business course, I thought that we might have had the same interest in making money. Should I go and talk to him? Should I stay shy?

Choice 1 : I go and talk to him.

Choice 2 : I stay shy and keep doing my thing.

I went and talk to him.

Just like I was thinking, the guy and I had the same interest in making money. In fact, we both wanted to sell hype clothing as a full time job. Should we team up?

Choice 1 : We teamed up

Choice 2 : We didn't teamed up.

We teamed up.

We teamed up and were selling so much that we opened a shop the same year. Should we go into a bigger shop to try to become the biggest reseller in Montreal?

Choice 1 : We grow into a bigger shop.

Choice 2 : We stay at the same shop because it is going well.

The bigger shop.

We decided to go into a bigger shop. The business was rolling pretty well until someone sent us an email. Should I check it or delete it?

Choice 1 : Check the message.

Choice 2 : Delete the message.

I checked the message.

Since we were not paying our taxes, we had to close or go to court.

Choice 1 : Close the shop

Choice 2 : Go to court.

We went to court.

We went to court and there they told us that we had to close the shop.

Write a choice here.

We deleted the message.

We deleted the message and someone came and told us that we had to close the shop.

Choice 1 : Close the shop.

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

I keep on trying at Ahuntsic College.

Even if I had failed a lot of exams in this business field, I had to keep on trying.

Choice 1 : I listen to what the teacher is saying.

Choice 2 : I start to sleep on the desk.

I started to sleep on the desk.

I started to sleep on the desk for the rest of the class. When I woke up, someone asked me if I wanted to smoke a joint.

Choice 1 : I said yes.

Choice 2 : I said no.

I said yes.

I got so high from smoking the joint that I almost couldn't walk. Should I cross the street or no?

Choice 1 : I crossed the street.

Choice 2 : I didn't crossed the street.

I crossed the street.

Right when I had just walk a meter I misconduct and stopped for no reason and got hit by a car.

Write a choice here.

The End.