Word count: 202
Choice count: 4
Section count: 3
Image count: 3
Error count: 0
Field Related Analysis:
Education : 5 matches (choice, don, reader, student, university)
Computer Science : 4 matches (choice, News, reader, superior)
Business : 3 matches (meeting, opportunity, sales)
Target Structure:
i decided to stay in France to work for Channels because it’s an lifetime opportunity and i really feel good about this decision. The good thing about france is the love in the air, I was lucky to find my self a fiance. He offerd me to go live at his place . So yesterday i didn't had good news from work, i’ve heard that my superior is going to retire. Two weeks later, I got a meeting with my news superior, nothing good we don’t really like each other and see things differently. Since it has been less than three month that work here, he decided to let me go because of my minors experiences in works sales. Even if it wasn't a choice at all my fiance propose me to come work for his compagny in Manaco.
Choice 1 : go live with your boyfriend
Choice 2 : Go back to Montreal , to study at University of Mcgill in admin
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Write a choice here.
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