I all started like this.

A hypertext narrative by

Lorans Fiset

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Word count: 878

Choice count: 9

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Computer Science : 12 matches (body, choice, Class, failure, hypertext, location, machine, manager, production, reader, running, Section)

Education : 11 matches (Down, choice, class, don, failing, failure, first, head, level, project, reader)

Nursing : 10 matches (accident, body, deodorant, director, gas, H, hospital, hygiene, SAD, section)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (2 matches)

wage (1 match)

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I all started like this.

Weird start.

You just got out of bed. It's only 7 am, but your head hurts like you spent the last 24 h on some hard drugs. You slept for only two hours last night. You were so stressed out. Maybe it's because you know deep down that you are a failure. Maybe it's because you were thinking about that time when you had to write a entire hypertext narrative project at 4 am for your english class that you were failing miserably. Or maybe you were so stressed because you have 3 job interviews today... At the same time! It's 7 am and all your job interviews are at 7:30 so you really need to decide wich one is your best shot to have a good job and you need to do it fast. You can:

Choice 1 : Go to the interview to work in a metal workshop to be a machinist and have a ''meh'' salary and a boring and repetitive job, but you are certain of being hired.

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2. The workshop interview.

You arrive in a hurry at the location of you job interview. You are too poor to put gas in your car so you had to use your bike and you are now sweating like hell. You realize that you smell really bad and your deodorant is at home. You want to go and get it, but the manager of the workshop is already waiting for you. You can:

Choice 1 : Tell him that you forgot your CV at home and you'll be back in know time. That's a lie. You know it. They know it.

Choice 2 : Go to their office and give the man a hug because everybody who works in a workshop have a bad hygiene and stinks anyways. Why be ashamed?

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5. A new friend.

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6. A new friend.

You give a long and passionate hug to the manager and he recognizes you as one of his own. You are definitly hired, but he's so impressed by you that he gives you two choices:

Choice 1 : You can take the job that you were going to have in the first place and become a level 1 Machinist.

Choice 2 : You can become the production director at the workshop and rule the world by his side.

7. But why?

You made the decision of having no future. You spend the next 45 years of your life operating the same machine day after day with zero satisfaction in what you're doing. Your life is a sad mess and you hate the choices you made. On day, an accident accurs in the workshop and the machine you are operating catches fire. You watch as the flames grown in size and start spreading to the whole building. You could escape, but you don't. Your life slowly fades away as the fire burns your flesh. Maybe this dead-end job wasn't for you after all. Too bad, you're now dead.

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A not so bad end.

You watch as the flames grown in size and start spreading to the whole building. You could escape, but you don't. Your life slowly fades away as the fire burns your flesh. Maybe this dead-end job wasn't for you after all. Too bad, you're now dead.

Choice 1 : To wake up and start making more bad life choices

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A really not bad end.

You kill the last flames just like you killed your inner fire and your dreams all those years ago. The workshop is saved and you continue working there untill your body is too old for you to stand up. In your hospital bed you think of all those things you wanted to do when you were younger, but couln't because you were working 50 hours a week at your low wage job. Too bad you're old now and time is running short. So short...

Choice 1 : To wake up and start making more bad life choices

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The End.