The premonitory dream

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Isael Fortin

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Word count: 1329

Choice count: 30

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Tourism : 16 matches (Alcohol, Deal, Extra, Hotel, Party, Sport, administration, bar, bit, coach, field, hotel, option, responsible, stop, times)

Computer Science : 11 matches (balanced, bit, CHILL, choice, field, huge, Pick, Random, shift, sleep, STAR)

Business : 8 matches (accountant, administration, business, deal, financial, leads, money, team)

Target Structure:

overtime (1 match)

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The premonitory dream

Image of an hockey game

The playoffs.

Here is a story about you. You have been playing hockey for 15 years. This sport takes a huge place in your life. It is really important for you to perform well and to be present at each and every game. This weekend, it is the most important one of the year for your team: the playoffs are starting in Montreal. You can't wait for this to happen. However, there is a problem. You forgot to tell your boss you were not available, and he scheduled you 3 times on the weekend. You now have to decide: should you go to work, or go to your game?

Choice 1 : Go to the game

Choice 2 : Go to work

Event at night

The evening.

Since deciding to go to your game, you now have the possibility to do something during your evening in Montreal. One of your friend offers you to go out to the bar with him. It would be a chance for you to maybe pick up some girls and have fun with your friends. However, the game is tomorrow at noon. It would be really tough to give your best effort while being tired. To add to that, your coach gave you a curfew that you should respect.

Choice 1 : Go to the bar

Choice 2 : Go to bed early

Picture of a bar

The bar.

Some people prefer to remain calm and stay far from alcohol when going out. Those people just like to talk and chill. Other just want to party and get drunk. What should you do?

Choice 1 : Party and get drunk

Choice 2 : Stay calm and get ready for the game tomorrow

Picture of a bed

Sleep is important.

Congratulations! You made the right decision. While still going out and having fun with your teammates, you will ready to go tomorrow for the most important game of the year. You have the priorities at the right place. You will be awarded by making this choice. You will be able to give your team the win in overtime while getting the game's first star. Great job!

Choice 1 :

Picture of a fast food restaurant

Obligations before passions.

Oh, tough decision, but I think it was the right one to take after all. You will have a little extra money that way. Now that your shift is completed, you have just one option left. Your bed will be so comfortable!

Choice 1 :

Picture of a woman

Girls over friends?

Oh, I see that you would like to have fun tonight! It's fine, you will have the time to sleep later. After you took a few drinks, a pretty girl is starts to flirt and dance with you. Should you go with her and leave your boys alone?

Choice 1 : Dance with the girl

Choice 2 : Continue to party with the boys

Picture of a woman

Is she worth it?

Oh, so you chose this girl over your boys. Hope she is worth it. After some minutes dancing with her, you don't know if she is as hot as you think, or you are just getting too drunk. It's not too late, you could still head back to your hotel and still have some hours of sleep.

Choice 1 : Sleep is more important than a random girl

Choice 2 : Bring her with you

Picture of some friends

Bros before everything.

You just took the right decision. Why leave your friends that you have known for a lot of years for some random girl that you've just met? You are going to have fun for the rest of the night with them. Or you could still be responsible and go back to the hotel. Better late than never.

Choice 1 : Head back to the hotel

Choice 2 : Continue to party

Picture of a hotel

A late decision.

So, I see that even if choosing to go out at the first place, you did not have much fun tonight. You should have made other decisions that would have made you happier, such as partying with your friends. Now you are drunk, and it will be really hard to get up for tomorrow. Bad decisions my friend.

Choice 1 :

Picture of a party

Partyyyy!

You just chose the option to continue the night out. The party never stops! You took the right decision. Why did you choose to come here after all? Yes, to have fun! Those beers are so good!

Choice 1 : Take one last shot

Choice 2 : Stop drinking, you had enough for tonight.

Picture of someone vomiting

The endgame.

Well, maybe your decision to take this last shot was not the best of your life. Have fun puking man !

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Picture of some beds

What a wonderful night !

What a balanced man you are! After having one of the coolest night of your life, you will be able to wake up with just a bit of a headache. You will be able to play your game, while not having the best one of your life. Still, better than nothing.

Choice 1 :

Picture of a man dreaming

Dreams.

After choosing your bed over the bar, you soon become tired, since you are the only one of your team who stayed at the hotel. After falling asleep, you fall in the world of dreams. You are dreaming that you just became a professional accountant, and you make millions every year. What a perfect world, cash and a job in business as you always wanted! In you dream, you come across a gorgeous women and start a relationship with her. She lives in Toronto, but the only way for you to make a lot of money as an accountant is in New York. What do you prefer?

Choice 1 : You love her so much, you choose to go with her

Choice 2 : A girl is not worth millions

Picture of people kissing

Couple life.

Choosing this option shows that you are a very attached to this girl. Amazingly, this leads to you time traveling 10 years in the future, ans you are no longer in a dream: it is real life! What happened?! Anyway, you have to deal with it. What should you do with it?

Choice 1 : Tell your girlfriend about your time traveling experience

Choice 2 : Act like nothing

Picture of some money

Money in the big apple.

Oh, you chose the job! It's fine, there are a lot of fishes in the ocean! You will find someone else among those millions of people, while becoming millionaire.

Choice 1 :

Picture of a sad person

Bad idea!

Well, this was not the best decision of your life. Your girl thinks that you are crazy, and leaves you. She doesn't want that kind of man. Back alone man, probably should have worked 10 years ago, at the first place!

Choice 1 :

Picture of a family

Life's good!

You continue to have a nice life with your girlfriend in Toronto. You now have kids with her and both live a healthy financial life. You just found a job in your field, in administration.

Choice 1 :

Picture of an empty sheet

No girl, no friend, no sleep...

Well, it seems like you lost everything with your decisions tonight. At first, you lost sleep for going out, than lost your friend because you chose the girl over them. Finally, you lost the girl, since you decided not to conclude with her. Hope you have a good game tomorrow, or this weekend will be lost.

Choice 1 :

Picture of a woman

Get to know her.

After bringing the girl back to your hotel room, you talk to her for a very long time. After a moment, you have to decide if you should do more with her.

Choice 1 : Do more

Choice 2 : Just sleep

Picture of a couple

A new girlfriend.

After the night, you guys fell in love and later became a couple. Think it was a great decision after all!

Choice 1 :

Picture of a lonely boy

Alone ?

Oh, come on! This girl wanted to do more. She just left. You should have given her what she wanted... Now go to sleep, the game is in just 3 hours.

Choice 1 :

The End.