My story.

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Education : 24 matches (CEGEP, Education, School, choice, classes, continuing, diploma, don, failed, feedback, field, field of study, first, goal, head, high school, market, primary school, reader, school, semester, social, teacher, university)

Computer Science : 13 matches (call, choice, -out, Error, field, pass, path, physical, reader, recovery, restart, session, sleep)

Nursing : 11 matches (accident, pressure, coma, feedback, hospital, medical, physical, sleep, SNAP, social, TV)

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My story.

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Cegep.

To begin, I am currently studying at the ''Cegep de Thetford'' and it is my first year on my field of study. I study Social Science because I want to be a physical education teacher and Social Science is one of the best ways if I want to achieve my goal.

Choice 1 : Drop-out.

Choice 2 : Go to university on a physical education teacher's program.

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Drop-out.

Maybe, it is only the first session but there is no way that I restart my session again because I failed five of my six classes. It's the second time that I failed a year like that and I decide now to drop-out school and find a job on restoration because it doesn't require any diploma. I am going to make so much money 40 hours a week! My friends won't believe it.

Choice 1 : Work accident.

Choice 2 : Little promotion.

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Go to university on a physical education teacher's program.

My two years at the Cegep are finally finished and my new program at the University Laval looks really nice. I am currently on my way to get my diploma of physical education teacher and everything are going as well as I thought it would have been.

Choice 1 : Get a diploma

Choice 2 : Continue school longer.

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Work accident.

It passes already two years since I drop-out and come at Normandin and I don't make a lot of money like I said to my friend. I have financial problems and to help again I just had a work accident and cut one of my left fingers. So, as you can see, nothing is going as well as I thought.

Choice 1 : Worst than planned.

Choice 2 : Recovery.

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Little promotion.

It passes already two years since I left school and I kind of like my job at Normandin. My boss said that I am doing good so, he gave me a cash promotion and he promoted me to chef. I can finally announce to my friends that I am making more money that I thought.

Choice 1 : A surprising invitation.

Choice 2 : Drugs probelms.

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Get a diploma.

I pass through the four years of the physical education teacher's program and I finally had my diploma so, I applied on every primary school and high school on the region. I hope I will have a job fast so, I could start making money faster and then start my real life.

Choice 1 : Get a job fast.

Choice 2 : Longer than planned.

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Continue school longer.

My program is finished and I had my 120 credits to get my diploma, but I really like the program I am on, so I decided to continue studying and go on a mastery to complete my school path with a mastery to be sure to have a job when I finish and also to have a bigger salary at the beginning of my career.

Choice 1 : Masters.

Choice 2 : Burnout.

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Worst than planned.

I just woke up from a coma and the nusre said that I have been 48 hours on that coma. I'm really shocked and don't know what to think about it. They explained to me that they did a medical error, so I will be amputated with the left hand. I am furious and this is too much pressure, so I fainted.

Choice 1 : New future.

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Recovery.

I am now at the hospital, and I am doing good. My recovery is going well and I just woke up from a coma because they put me to sleep to sew up my finger back on my hand. I am really happy that they could do this because life is very different without a finger. Maybe, I could not go back to the restoration.

Choice 1 : Little promotion.

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A surprising invitation.

Now that I am the chef I am more known on the region. The other day I received a call from Gordon Ramsay, and he wanted me to go on his TV show "Hell's kitchen". Honestly I couldn't refuse that invitation because it is the biggest opportunity of my life to pierce on cooked and maybe becomes very popular.

Choice 1 : Popularity

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Drugs probelms.

Like I said about half a year ago I had a promotion, so I start making more money than what I needed live a good life. I know it is bad, but I am now dealing, buying and also using drugs. This is a big problem but I can't get out of it because I am now at the bottom of the hole and about losing my job.

Choice 1 : Return at the beginning

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Get a job fast.

I just got my diploma and I can't believe how fast every school offered me jobs. Habitually, this program is really contingent, but I am on the good generation I guess, so I'm now teacher at Thetford Mine's high school and I didn't plan to move out one day.

Choice 1 : Taking importance.

Longer than planned.

I just finished my four years at the university and I heard that there are no jobs offers on my program for about the next five years. I am desperate because I put too much effort on that dream that I can believe I won't work for the next five years, so I must continue University during this time.

Choice 1 : Continue school longer.

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Burnout.

I think that my decision to continue school was not the good one to take because I am now more tired than I have ever been. I'm about to drop-out and go back home. I should have gone on the labor market right after I got my diploma. This is the worst decision of my life.

Choice 1 : Take back on me

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Masters.

I finished my program last semester, but I decided to continue school because I loved being at the university and I don't regret my choice. My masters on physical education teacher will only give me advantage for my salary and my importance. I look forward for my future job, but I also really like university.

Choice 1 : Finishing school.

New future.

When I heard that I lost my finger forever I realized that my career on restoration was finished, so I am right now thinking about a way to solve this. The only idea that comes in my head again and again is to go back to cegep and find another program that I will like as much as the last one.

Choice 1 : Go back to the Cegep

Popularity.

My experience at hell's kitchen give me a lot of feedback as a cook and I really loved what I did there. It also gives me popularity. I'm now known everywhere I go on my region, and this a real good feeling. After that experience, I decided to go back at the Cegep enroll myself on a cook's program.

Choice 1 : Go back to the Cegep.

Taking importance.

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Choice 1 : Little promotion.

Take back on me.

I realized that I couldn't stay like that, so I took back on me and said to myself that I didn't go through all these years only to give up at the end and drop-out. I decided to stop continuing school and go get my diploma right now, so I won't do a burnout again.

Choice 1 : Get a diploma.

Finishing school.

I finally finished my additional years at the university and it couldn't help me better because I applied on every school on the region, and I got a job on a finger snap so much it was fast. So, I am really proud of my choice and I won't ever regret it because I am doing my dream career.

Choice 1 : Get a job fast.

The End.