Kinesiology and Hockey.

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Choice count: 30

Section count: 23

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Field Related Analysis:

Education : 21 matches (Down, National, adult, choice, classes, coach, college, courses, exam, fail, failed, field, first, grades, major, management, market, method, teacher, training, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 13 matches (act, company, drugs, fact, golden, living, market, month, offer, security, settled, state, waste)

Psychology : 11 matches (addiction, concept, drug, field, focus, game, happiness, hit, ice, love, need)

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Kinesiology and Hockey.

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Graduated from college.

I just finished my study at the college. At the moment, I would like to continue my studies in the Kinesiology field, but I also would like to focus and improve my hockey game.

Choice 1 : Focus on hockey.

Choice 2 : Go to the University of Montreal.

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Focus on hockey.

I love this sport and the fact that I decide to focus on the hockey is very beneficial for my game. I work every time hard on the ice and off the ice at the gym. A team of Quebec want me in their team.

Choice 1 : Enter the team.

Choice 2 : Stay on my actual team.

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Go to the University of Montreal.

I just receive my first exam note and I fail it. I'm discouraged from the start of University.

Choice 1 : I put the effort and endure for better grades.

Choice 2 : I tell myself that's too hard for me and give up.

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Enter the team.

I entered the team and played my first game. It's been good and my teammates are very nice. Also, the competition is stronger in this team, so I have to surpass myself. However, during my last game, I made a mistake and the coach yelled at me.

Choice 1 : Talking back to my trainer.

Choice 2 : Listen to him.

Stay on my actual team.

I stayed in this team because I'm used playing with my teammates, and we have a nice relationship between us. However, when I refused the offer to enter the Quebec team, one of the players of this team saw me at the shopping center and insulted me.

Choice 1 : Punch him.

Choice 2 : Try to talk like an adult.

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Talking back to my trainer.

Me and my trainer we insulted each other, and we were very angry each other. At one point, the assistant coach try to calm me, but I was not controllable, I had lost my means. Eventually, the management of the team decided to send me back from the team.

Choice 1 : Final 1.

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Listen to him.

I told him that I understood and that I would do my best not to make it happen again during a game. In the end, we shook hands and it was settled.

Choice 1 : Final 2.

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Punch him.

After he insulted me, I hit him, and we started fighting in the shopping center in front of all the people. Finally, security came and they pulled us out. We each had a ticket and a ban to enter this shopping center.

Choice 1 : Final 3.

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Try to talk like an adult.

After he insulted me, I told him to calm down and I explained the situation and the reasons why I did not enter his team. He then told me that he understood and that he apologies for behaving that way. Then, I offered to go and have a beer to chat. Finally, we became good friends.

Choice 1 : Final 4.

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I put the effort and endure for better grades.

Every day of the week I concentrate on my studies and I try to improve myself. When I do not understand any concept, I will ask my teacher for help to allow me to move forward and increase my grades. By doing this, I maximize my chances of success and I give up the excuses. A month later, I get a note and I still failed.

Choice 1 : Take summer courses.

Choice 2 : Spread my classes over different years to lighten my session.

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I tell myself that's too hard for me and give up.

I find myself at home doing nothing because I do not have a job. All of my friends are either at the University or they continue their professional training, so they are almost never available to keep me company.

Choice 1 : Start taking drugs.

Choice 2 : Start a professional training.

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Take summer courses.

By opting for this method, it allows me to lighten my sessions and also not to waste time and go as usual.

Choice 1 : Final 5.

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Spread my classes over different years to lighten my session.

By opting for this method, I free myself a lot of time to perfect my work and thus be able to succeed. On the other hand, I'm wasting time and I'm taking the time to enter the job market.

Choice 1 : Final 6.

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Start taking drugs.

The addiction I developed with the drug brings me into a very bad state. I can not get up in the morning without taking it. I am really in trouble.

Choice 1 : Final 7.

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Start a professional training.

I now find my way to happiness. I discovered a passion for engineering and I will soon finish my training to become a professional engineer. I am really happy.

Choice 1 : Final 8.

Final 1.

I find myself on my old team, so I will not have the chance to progress. In addition, since I was fired from the team, many other teams do not want to have me on their team. I find myself in a bad position.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 2.

Several years have passed and I find myself today in the replacement for the National Hockey League. I'm proud of myself and my career.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 3.

After committing my act of violence, I was dismissed from the team and I can not return to a team for a few months. I need to calm down.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 4.

We have remained very good friends and now we are on the same team in the Quebec Major Junior League, and we are a very successful duo. We stand out from other players, and we are two hopes for the national hockey league.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 5.

Since I wasted no time in my summers, I had a very good job as a kinesiologist working with the Remparts de Québec hockey team. I am very lucky to have had the chance to get my hands on this golden opportunity.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 6.

Since I lost two years in my classes, I do not have a position as a kinesiologist, because no institution is looking for a kinesiologist. So, I have to wait for a vacancy and I can then practice my job.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 7.

This time, I'm going too much. I have consumed too much and died of an overdose.

Choice 1 : Restart

Final 8.

I am now a full-time professional engineer and I make a very good living. In addition, I also met an extraordinary woman. I am grateful to life for guiding me on my path.

Choice 1 : Restart

The End.