The Blue Line Hypertext Narrative.

A hypertext narrative by

Yohann Veilleux-Lessard

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Word count: 1171

Choice count: 44

Section count: 29

Image count: 0

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 20 matches (CEGEP, Down, School, behavior, choice, class, college, diploma, don, exam, grade, grades, homework, learn, reading, school, taught, technology, trainee, vocational)

Tourism : 12 matches (City, Marketing, Program, bar, dep, marketing, pension, program, stop, track, train, watch)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 10 matches (accident, Bar, Book, drugs, House, misconduct, noise, pension, profession, release)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (1 match)

drawback (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

pension (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

thoughtful (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

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The Blue Line Hypertext Narrative.

It all started like this.

I just finish my five years of school with some good grades, I really want to go in police technology, where should I go to?

Choice 1 : I go to Québec College.

Choice 2 : I go to Sherbrook College.

I go to Québec College.

I'm very happy to be in Québec City, it's beautiful and it's near my home but, I have a lot of homework.

Choice 1 : Ahhh, I'm going to make them later...

Choice 2 : I do them right now, so I can be free after.

Choice 3 : I stop this program.

Ahhh, I'm going to make them later.

Now, I have free time and want to do something.

Choice 1 : I go out with my friends at the bar.

Choice 2 : I say at home and watch a movie.

I go out with my friends at the bar.

I drank so much! It’s been so cool, I now need to get home.

Choice 1 : I take my car.

Choice 2 : I ask a friend to take me home.

I take my car.

I did an accident and died. Be more intelligent next time!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I ask a friend to take me home.

I did my homework before class and got a good grade.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I do them right now, so I can be free after.

I am so happy my homework is done, it’s been long, but I manage to get them done! It’s windy outside and I hear a weird noise coming from the backyard.

Choice 1 : I go see what it is.

Choice 2 : I stay in.

I go see what it is.

It’s all good, it was my dad working in the garage. He now asks me or help but I don’t really want, I just pasted few hours doing homework.

Choice 1 : I go help him.

Choice 2 : I don’t go help him.

I go help him.

I had a good relationship with my dad, he is now retired, and we had a good time!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I don’t go help him.

All my life I got the drawback of this night when my dad asks me to help him, I didn’t, and he got hurt.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I go to Sherbrook College.

Sherbrook! I love Sherbrook, it’s so calm and peaceful, I need to go out for a walk! Oh! I see someone stuck on a train track and the train is coming too fast! What should I do?!

Choice 1 : I help her.

Choice 2 : I don’t help her.

I stay in.

I finally knew that it was my dad in the garage. My friend asked me to go to meet him, I got a big evening. What should I do?

Choice 1 : I go to meet him.

Choice 2 : I stay at my house.

I go to meet him.

We played videogames all night without seen the time past. I woke up late next morning because I was too tired.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I stay at my house.

I manage to get a good night and pulled off straight A’s in my exam!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I stop this program.

I really don’t like homework and it may not be the good profession for me.

Choice 1 : I stay at school.

Choice 2 : I find a job.

I stay at school.

I don't know what to do. Where should I go?

Choice 1 : I stay in CEGEP and switch program.

Choice 2 : I do a Diploma of Vocational Studies (DVS)(DEP).

I do a Diploma of Vocational Studies (DVS)(DEP).

Oh! I love my program so much, I’m in a welding program and love it!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I find a job.

Okay, now I know that I want to get a job but in which place?

Choice 1 : In a marketing place.

Choice 2 : In a little factory.

I stay in CEGEP and switch program.

I don’t think it was the right choice, I still have way too much homework, I have a lack of school and i feel like it's a dead-end job. I quit.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

In a marketing place.

The drive of work is taking me down… I am making a lot of money, but I don’t even have time for it, I’m lonely and have nobody to be with for my pension. I feel unappreciated.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

In a little factory.

I've been a trainee for a long time and I learn the ropes quickly. I don't have a lot of money but I have the best familly ever and this is what's important.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I help her.

Well, you got hit by the train to, it was coming too fast. Next time be more careful, there was nothing to do with this person unfortunately.

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

I don’t help her.

The poor lady died, and the police thinks that I've made this serious misconduct and that it is because of me. I go to jail for a long time. I have the choice of the prison. Where do I want to go?

Choice 1 : In Québec.

Choice 2 : In Montréal.

In Québec.

It’s been a week since I am in prison and it’s not easy for me. I had a week with thoughtful reflections. They ask me if I want help from the prison. Should I take it?

Choice 1 : Yes please!

Choice 2 : No I’m good.

In Montréal.

It is so hard to be in a prison! Many people ask me to join them, but some seem to be good and some don’t. It would be cool to be with the tough guys. I join the….

Choice 1 : Good ones.

Choice 2 : The tough ones.

Yes please!

My time as been much quicker because I got release earlier for good behavior!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

No, I’m good.

I had some issues during my time and did it completely. It was so long!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

The tough ones.

I think I love them, but I’m not very sure. They ask me weird tasks and I think I’m going to be in trouble… After a mouth I’ve been added 2 more years because I tried to make enter some drugs in the prison….

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

Good ones.

They have taught me some cool hobbies like wood sculptures and book reading. I love them! My time went so fast with some good friends!

Choice 1 : Go back to start.

The End.