The career of a young man!

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olivier messier

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Word count: 1036

Choice count: 27

Section count: 18

Image count: 18

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 16 matches (Down, School, choice, college, diploma, don, high school, knowledge, learning, mentor, private, project, school, teach, training, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 15 matches (clients, custom, district, fraud, House, houses in, Independent, living, mortgage, offer, private, process, street, title, young)

Construction and Civil Engineering : 12 matches (architect, cut, drawing, drawing plans, facing, felt, independent, job site, safe, underground, design, plan)

Target Structure:

fulfillment (1 match)

income (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

internship (1 match)

invaluable (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

on-the-job-training (2 matches)

overwhelm (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (7 matches)

thoroughly (1 match)

wage (1 match)

worthwhile (1 match)

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The career of a young man!

School graduation

School choices.

You have now completed high school and decided to enroll yourself in architectural design. You need to apply to college in the following week, choose wisely.

Choice 1 : Private school

Choice 2 : Montmorency

Choice 3 : Wow, an architect sees you as great potential and offer you an internship where he will teach you all the ins-and-outs. You're not sure he is legit, are you going to accept?

University of Montreal

University or OTJ?

Everything is going perfect for you! You now have your diploma but there are still choices coming your way! Right now, you are facing two of them. Do you want to finish the entire learning process and earn the highest title by going to university? An on-the-job-training with the best of the city might seem interesting as well. What are you going to do!

Choice 1 : On-the-job-training with the best.

Choice 2 : University

?

University or stay as a technician.

You have taken the more common path of study. You now have your diploma and the opportunity to extend your knowledge by going to a university. Although it seems interesting for you to get a higher income, you felt in love with drawing plan and feel like pursuing your study would be with no purpose. Choose thoroughly!

Choice 1 : University

Choice 2 : Stay as a technician.

risky

Underground architecture.

You now have been working with this man for two years. Doing sketches and models but now it is time to go on the job site. If you accept to go you are taking the chance of getting cut by an officer for working without the papers for it, if not... who knows...

Choice 1 : Go to the job site.

Choice 2 : Don't go to the job site.

boats and houses

Boats or Houses?

You are surrounded with the best and with that comes opportunities. Your mentor is asking you if you want to work with custom boats or millionaire's houses?

Choice 1 : Boats.

Choice 2 : Houses.

University graduation

The studies are over!

Finally! You did it. Having completed university you can now say proudly that you are an architect. There is still one big choice that you need to make. Are you going to start your own firm or join your friend's firm?

Choice 1 : Start your own firm

Choice 2 : Join a friend's firm.

University graduation

Finally, finish!

You made it, university is over. You now have to decide if you are going to be working for the city or for yourself.

Choice 1 : Work for the city.

Choice 2 : Work for myself.

Jail

Too risky.

You took the chance to go on the job site without papers and you found yourself in front of an officer who caught you. You undermined the risk and now have to face the consequences. You are now in jail for fraud.

Choice 1 : In jail.

Architectural models

Safe bet.

You thoughtfully consider going but decided not to because of the invaluable knowledge you manage to acquire without paying for school. As a result, you will continue drawing plans and making models for him.

Choice 1 : You keep drawing plans and models.

Retirement

Straight job as a technician.

Your choices made you happy so far, but you are stalling. You will be doing plans and models for the next 30-40 years until your retirement, but at least it is what you love doing right?

Choice 1 : Retired

Boats

Boat life.

You really are living the dream! You are designing boats in Monte Carlo and having a ton of fun doing so. You decided to buy a house there and are going to spend the rest of your days looking over the sea.

Choice 1 : Happily retired

Houses

Hawaï!

Wow, you find yourself planing houses in the paradisiac islands of Hawaï! The weather is just perfect and you do not want to leave that magical place. You settle down and work there until you retire.

Choice 1 : Keep living the dream until retirement.

Bullet dodged

Bullet dodged!

Some guys on your team did not make the same wise choice and decided to go on the site. They got caught and lost their job and more! That really showed you made the right call. Do you want to stay and draw plans for this man who ruined your friends carer or go back to school?

Choice 1 : Go back to school.

Choice 2 : Stay there and draw plans.

Overwhelm

Rough times.

Your friends are all gone and you are starting to feel overwhelm by the workload. You decided that you will stay there until you have enough money to pay for your mortgage then you will find something else that will give you your drive of work back!

Choice 1 : Work until you have enough money to change job.

Friend

Friend's firm.

You are now working with your best buddy for his firm. You are having a lot a fun and you just got a wage upgrade which is amazing! You do not see any drawbacks from working there, therefore you have decided to stay until your retirement.

Choice 1 : Continue to work until retirement.

Retire

Your firm!

You worked hard for everything you have and are now rewarded by having your own firm! There is a lot of respect on your work and you have big feeling of fulfillment. All the studying has shown to be worthwhile, now you can sit back and retire without any problems.

Choice 1 : Retire.

City district plan

Working for the city.

You are working for the city and have been attributed the responsibility to plan the new district. You feel great about this position and decided to stay as an architect for the city until you retire.

Choice 1 : Plan the new district until retirement.

Success.

Independent architect.

You wanted to do whatever you felt like doing, you are served! Working independently makes you able to choose your project. The word on the street is that you are doing an amazing job. You have no problem finding clients and will continue to choose the project of your liking until retirement!

Choice 1 : Continue to do the project of your liking until retirement.

The End.