First-Attempt

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Alexandra Leblond

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Word count: 209

Choice count: 4

Section count: 5

Image count: 5

Error count: 10

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Archaeology : 17 matches

(her, here, horse, re, section)

Web development : 5 matches

(call, select, write)

Education : 5 matches

(choice, first, reader)

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First-Attempt

Into the Mystic.

POV: You're a knight in the 1500s. Your queen sends you on a quest to find her long-lost twin. She's been looking for her ever since they have been detached in their youth (they're Siamese twins). Her twin escaped from civilisation because during the detachment operation, the surgeons also scalped her. She healed well, but remained quite ugly... People in town would call her names, and it eventually became too much to handle, so she flew away on her dragon. Mi Lord, Does thee wish to fulfill this royal duty?

Choice 1 : Hell nah

Choice 2 : you gotta do watchu gotta do, let's go

twins

Hell nah, she escaped to find peace. I will not disturb her peace.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Select a section to link to here.

Yurr.

As a Knight, you respect your queen and obey her wishes, you go off on this new adventure. How will you get there?

Choice 1 : With my trusted mighty horse

Choice 2 : A dragon HELL YEAHHH.

Horsy.

Great choice!

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A dragon HELL YEAHHH.

oh no... the dragon thought you were diner. You're cooked!

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