MY ICECREAM.

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Dale Sanjo

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Word count: 165

Choice count: 8

Section count: 4

Image count: 4

Error count: 15

Field Related Analysis

Food and catering : 12 matches

(chocolate, creamy, delicious, eat, fresh, shop, sweet)

Education : 7 matches

(choice, first, school)

Dance : 3 matches

(soft, walk)

Target Structure: (0 matches)

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MY ICECREAM.

The game of my life. I choose my icecream.

Its time to decide what I want to eat. I've decided to eat icecream. There are two choices that I can choose. The first is strawberry icecream. My next choice is chocolate icecream.

Choice 1 : Strawberry icecream.

Choice 2 : Chocolate icecream.

strawberry icecream

Strawberry icecream.

The strawberry icecream is soft and fresh. It is sweet and fruity. The colour is soft pink, and it tastes like summer. Howvwer , it takes me twenty minutes to walk there.

Choice 1 : I buy it from the shop near my school.

Choice 2 : I buy it from the shop near my house.

strawberry icecream

Chocolate icecream.

Chocolate icecream is rich is rich and creamy. It looks dark and delicious.

Choice 1 : I buy it from the shop near my house

Choice 2 : I buy it from the shop near my house

I buy it from my house.

I'm satisfied.

Choice 1 : the end

Choice 2 : The end.