Dream choice.

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nysha ngassaki

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Word count: 219

Choice count: 9

Section count: 6

Image count: 6

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis

Education : 13 matches

(cegep, choice, school, university)

Chemistry : 4 matches

(science, section)

Dance : 3 matches

(back, out)

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Dream choice.

The beginning, getting out of cegep.

Getting out of cegep, now I have to choose a university to go to.

Choice 1 : Getting out of cegep.

Choice 2 : Going to work in Montreal

University of Columbia

Planning the university.

Now I will be able to go to the University of Columbia in the USA.

Choice 1 : In whitch program to go

Choice 2 : Working in the USA.

Planning what to do.

Working in the USA.

Finally I’m working in the USA a cashier, and it’s not my dream job. I have an apartment, and a dog. I wish I could go back to school.

Choice 1 : Working in the USA.

Working in the USA

Give this section a short title.

Now it’s time to choose between tow programs that I really enjoy.

Choice 1 : Going into journalisme

Choice 2 : Going into a forensic science program

School programs

Finally choosing the journalism program.

Now, I’m finally happy, because journalism was my final choice. From now on, I can do the program of my life. I am happy with the choice I made.

Choice 1 : Finally choosing the journalism program.

Journalism

Forensic science program.

I choose this program, and I feel unhappy about my choice. I wish that I could go back. Now I’m doing a program that is not in my liking.

Choice 1 : Forensic science program.

Police