Comfort zone or new.

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Rafael Rivera

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Word count: 1533

Choice count: 45

Section count: 31

Image count: 31

Error count: 23

Field Related Analysis

Education : 137 matches

(cegep, choice, class, classes, coach, college, colleges, courses, diploma, don, down, education, first, grade, grades, high school, learn, learned, management, reader, school, specific, student, teach, teacher, technology, test, training, university)

Archaeology : 25 matches

(class, close, here, history, organization, point, section, technology, thing)

Police-Technology : 24 matches

(criminal, detective, patrol, physical test, police, police officer)

Target Structure: (18 matches)

foot in the door (1 match)

hr (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

internship (2 matches)

learn the ropes (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

overwhelmed (2 matches)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

pulled off (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

withholding (1 match)

bribed (1 match)

abroad (4 matches)

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Comfort zone or new.

End of high school.

It is the middle of the high school, and I have to decide if I want to become a Police officer or a teacher. I have the grade to do both now the question is, will I be able to enter and get passed the physical test of the Police. Or do I choose to become a teacher to have more time.

Choice 1 : Become a Police officer.

Choice 2 : Become a teacher.

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Police officer.

I have the grade to become a Police officer, the question is I go to the cegep or to the GRC. If I go to the cegep I will have more thing to do with my technology, if I decide to go to the GRC, I will become a police officer faster.

Choice 1 : Go to cegep.

Choice 2 : Far away.

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New school.

I go to the cegep of Sherbrooke in Police Technology. I have the grades, so I decide to do it in three years that way I can learn the ropes of becoming a police officer. The only problem is, I will need to have great time management, so I don't get overwhelmed by all the work I will have to do during these three years. After these three years, I will have to decide what I will do with my program.

Choice 1 : go to nicolet.

Choice 2 : Do an internship.

Another new shcool?

I decide to go to Nicolet Police School. There I will learn even more and do specific training only related to police and nothing else, after this I can have almost any job I want.

Choice 1 : Get out of Nicolet succesfully.

Choice 2 : Quit.

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Quit.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Start over

Finished.

I got my diploma from Nicolet, so now, I could get any job I want I just have to pass a little formation. I just need to do a couple of years as a patrol officer to get some real life experience, and after I have the choice do I continue as a patrol officer or to I choose another job.

Choice 1 : Stay.

Choice 2 : choose another job.

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The best.

I decide to stay as an officer, after a lot of overtime and on-the-job-training, I became the best officer in town. I earned a premium wage for all my action. I now wonder if I finish my career on that or do I stay in the same place.

Choice 1 : Retire.

Choice 2 : Stay.

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Retire.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : The end.

Stay.

I decide to stay, I stay there a couple of years again, but I grow tireed of doing the same thing over and over. It is a dead end job after all.

Choice 1 : Start over.

New things can't hurt.

I decide to try some new thing and try the S.W.A.T. I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to pull the job, but I did I pulled off the job. It is one of my dream jobs, so I am very happy to do it. The problem is, it is also the most difficult. Will I be able to continue?

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Choice 2 : overwhelmed.

Choice 3 : continue.

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already?

I stayed in the S.A.W.T for 3 years, but it was too much. The condition is not good, and I got injured, so I quit.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Amusing.

It is really fun being there I always wanted to be in this section. It is demanding a lot, but I am able to do it while still having fun which is impressive, after I did 15 years there, I become to old for the things they do, so I chose to retire.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Trying.

With my technology, I decide to do an internship to see if there is job other than a police I want to do that are still related to it. I have a lot of choices, I can even decide to go to another country and explore. I can stay near home or go abroad and still making money.

Choice 1 : border.

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all kinds of things.

I decide to be a border patrol it was one of my dreams as a young kid. When I get there it is not like I hoping to, really hard job, long day and dangerous. There was one time when a saw a colleague let passed some people without even searching. From then, I knew I had to choose.

Choice 1 : stay good.

Choice 2 : flip to the dark side.

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There we go.

I learned the ins-and-outs, people were getting paid to let other passed, but I chose to stay and not let it happen. With my actions, the boss gave me a better wage, and I got a good career.

Choice 1 : The end.

Bad.

I saw how much cash my colleague were making, so I decided to get bribed to and withholding information as long as the boss don't find out everything is OK. I did it for one year but then, he found out, and I got fired.

Choice 1 : Start over.

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Far away.

I decide to do the GRC, it is not close to home, but I can get a job faster than with the Police Technology. I will put a foot in the door, and see how it will go.

Choice 1 : Stay.

Choice 2 : quit.

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Stay.

I stayed in the GRC and got a job quick because of the vacant position. I became a detective I shut down a lot of criminal organization and arrested hundreds of criminals. I know have the choice to continue or retire.

Choice 1 : continue.

Choice 2 : retire.

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quit.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Start over.

stay.

I continue but after only two years, I get shot by a criminal and die on the spot.

Choice 1 : Start over.

retire.

I retire with a lot of money, and I have a pension, so my mortgage doesn't stress me. I can live happily and do the things I want to do.

Choice 1 : end.

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teacher.

I go to the cegep and then to the university to become a teacher, and now the question is I follow my passion and become a physical education teacher or a history teacher.

Choice 1 : history teacher.

Choice 2 : physical education.

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history teacher.

I finished, and can now become a teacher, but I was really interested by the classes and my teacher who was a researcher. At first, I wanted to be a teacher he changed my point of view, but I still went to teacher.

Choice 1 : stay teacher.

Choice 2 : high school.

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stay teacher.

Years passed, and I have decided to teach history at university. Since I was a great teacher, the best history school invited to teach there, so I went to the school, and it was the best decision. I became the best teacher in the world and got a lot of price.

Choice 1 : The end.

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high school.

I decided to teach it at high school instead of university. I was the teacher everyone wanted because everybody passed with me. I had the opportunity to go abroad to teach history, so I had to decide.

Choice 1 : high school.

Choice 2 : go abroad.

high school.

I stayed in high school where I was comfortable, and everybody passed I was reputed, and was invited to history meeting.

Choice 1 : The end.

abroad.

I went to Europe to teach history. When I arrived there, the courses were really different, and I didn't know it. I wasn't able to find a job, and ruined myself.

Choice 1 : Start over.

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physical education.

I decided to teach physical education, it was hard there was not a lot of work, so it took time.

Choice 1 : continue.

old times.

My old high school had a place for me, so I went for it. The football program was also searching for people to coach, but HR didn't want me to do both, so I had to choose.

Choice 1 : coach.

Choice 2 : teach.

teach.

Against my will, I decided to stay only as a teacher. Even if I wanted to coach, being a teacher was a lot of fun and the student were happy to make to class each time, so I stayed and retired as a teacher.

Choice 1 : The end.

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coach.

I went on to coach on my old football team. At first, the team was hard to coach and was lacking experience. The first season was hard, but we worked a lot, made the championship even winning it not once but twice, two in a row. Colleges saw this and I became a college coach.

Choice 1 : The end.

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