The story of your life.

A hypertext narrative by

Vincent Veilleux

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Word count: 1118

Choice count: 18

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 11

Field Related Analysis

Education : 49 matches

(choice, class, college, don, first, management, project, school, skipping class, teacher, technology, university, vacation)

Business : 41 matches

(business, capital, company, exchange, insurance, management, manager, money, offer, office, salary, sell, stock, team, technology)

Archaeology : 40 matches

(capital, class, environment, exchange, her, here, keep, point, sam, section, study, technology, tell, thing)

Target Structure: (9 matches)

in-depth (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (1 match)

overtime (3 matches)

overwhelming (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

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The story of your life.

The new start.

I just finished college, in Administrative and Manegement Technology. After years of straight A's is finally time for me to choose what I want to do for the next years. My mom tells me to stay at school and to go to the university. My dad, he tells me to start working because experience is the key of success.

Choice 1 : Go to the university.

Choice 2 : Start to work.

image of university

Go to the university.

This is my first class at the university, after a summer of party with my friend. The teacher asked us to make team of two then we will keep for all the semesters. I don't know anybody in my class and only two people are left, Léa and Sam.

Choice 1 : Team up with Léa.

Choice 2 : Team up with Sam.

Sam or Léa

Start to work.

After all these years of time management and study I finally finished school for all my life. After all of this I'm Overwhelming and thinked to take this last summers off and going on vacation, before start to work.

Choice 1 : Start to find a job.

Choice 2 : Go on vacation.

Team up with Léa.

After a month of working with Léa I start to feel some emotion for Léa. We had a really good chemistry with each other and work really well together. I didn't know if I should tell her how I feel for her or keep it for me.

Choice 1 : Tell her then I love her.

Choice 2 : Keep my feeling for me.

Love

Team up with Sam.

After a month, we started to be good friends, we talked about what we want to do in the future and how we both had the idea to create our own company. A day he asked me if I wanted to start a business with him.

Choice 1 : Start a business with Sam.

Choice 2 : Don't start a business with Sam.

Start to find a job.

I was looking for a job and a friend of my dad offer me a place in his business of tire. I also found a job online to work in an insurance company. My friend's dad is very nice, but is company was small, and I knew then I will not have a big salary. The insurance was the opposite very nice salary but not very nice.

Choice 1 : Work for my friend's dad.

Choice 2 : Work in an insurance company.

Go on vacation.

I was looking to vacation in Europe or Australia and I found a fly not too expensive for Spain. I always wanted to see all the world and to meet some people. I was so exited then I could't sleep for all the night before the fly. When I seated on the plane, I was very happy. During the fly some strange nose start, and they told us to put our belt. Suddenly the left side of the plane made a big nose, and the plane started to go right in the ocean. No one survive.

Choice 1 : Start over

Tell her then I love her.

I invited Léa to a coffee place and said then this was for working on our school project, but in reality it was for telling her then I love her. The day of the revelation I was very nervous, but happy. We started to work like always and when I was feeling comfortable, I told her how I felt about her and if she wanted to be together. She answers yes, and then she was feeling the same thing for me. After we finished university we got married and started a business together. We become happy and married for the rest of our life.

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marriage ring

Keep my feeling for me.

After deciding to not telling her I started to depress and to put aside the school. The fact then I was skipping class didn't help my relation with Léa, who started to be angry, because I wasn't doing my part of the project. The hell started less I came to school because I was depressing, more Léa was angry about me so more I was depressing. I started drugs and stop completely school.

Choice 1 : Start over

Start a business with Sam.

We started to think about what we wanted to create a business and Sam suggested making a company water bottle who can filter any liquid into water. I then knew that was it, and we will get a lot of success. We became very rich, and we invested all our capital into stock exchange. After a decade of doing that we become rich at the point then we didn't have to work anymore, and we sell our company.

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Bottle

Don't start a business with Sam.

We stay good friend's for all the university and after and I became an intern in a company of textile. I was an internship during tree month, and they decide to take on me. I was in-depth, because of the university so having a real job helped me, but still needing more money.

Choice 1 : Ask for an augmentation.

Choice 2 : Work some overtime.

office

Work for my friend's dad.

I started working for my friend's dad, and I felt really good, because everyone on the job are really nice. Each morning I was happy and wanted to work, because of the environment of work who was really nice. I became not rich but not poor and happy.

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Work in an insurance company.

I started working the insurance company and never felt very at my place, the people don't even talked to each other if they didn't have to. I became rich, but sad.

Choice 1 : Start over

Ask for an augmentation.

I asked for an augmentation. They told me then I was here only for a few months and didn't like then I was already asking for an augmentation. Tree day after they fired me and told me then I was not in the company vibe.

Choice 1 : Start over

Work some overtime.

I started working overtime and really gave all my effort in what I did. They see then I worked hard decide to give me a vacant position of a manager and told me then all of this is because I gave all myself into my work. I evolve really fast in the company and became chef of all the office. I was happy and rich.

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