Police officer.

A hypertext narrative by

elody pelchatcote

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Word count: 1143

Choice count: 30

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis

Education : 54 matches

(choice, coach, college, don, down, first, head, learn, p, reader, technology, trainee, training)

Police-Technology : 36 matches

(arrest, charge, crime, crime scene, investigation, killer, patrol, perpetrator, police, police officer, suspect, victim)

Law : 35 matches

(arrest, assault, blood, charge, crime, director, dogs, escape, house, minutes, misconduct, noise, notice, office, police officer, presents, residue)

Target Structure: (8 matches)

dread (1 match)

in-depth (1 match)

invaluable (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

perpetrator (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

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Police officer.

The end of college.

I have just finished my Police Technology program at college.Now I had to decide : should I go work at police station or should I go dog training?

Choice 1 : Police station.

Choice 2 : Dog training.

police officer

Police station.

You chose police station which led on my first day of my OJT, the director of the police station gives me a tour. Now I Had to decide: should I go on patrol or should I stay at the office?

Choice 1 : Go on patrol.

Choice 2 : Stay at the office.

police station

Dog training.

You chose dog training which led to on my first day in the kennel.The director came to get to give me a tour. He introduced me two dogs, Lliy, and Jack. Lily is still a puppy and Jack was abandoned by his last owner because he bit him.Now I had to decide: should I take Lily or should I take Jack?

Choice 1 : Take Lily.

Choice 2 : Take Jack.

dog training

Go on patrol.

You chose go on patrol which led to I go on patrol with Mathis, a police officer with a lot of experience. A few minutes after leaving of police station, we hear on the radio that a body has been discovered. Now, I had to decide : should I take the call or should I don't take the call?

Choice 1 : Take the call.

Choice 2 : Don't take the call.

police car

Stay at the office.

You chose to stay at the office which led to the director introduced me to Laurie, a lab technician, and my trainee for the day. I stayed with him to work on samples. It is 5 P.m, the day is over, but a new sample arrives. Now I had to decide: should I stay or should I go home?

Choice 1 : I stay for helping Laurie.

Choice 2 : I go home.

laboratory

Take Lily.

You chose Lily which led to the director gives ME Lily's toys and her bowl, so I can take her home.She requires a lot of attention and even after weeks, I can't manage to train her to meet my director's expectations.Now I had to decide :should I giving Lily back and I resigning or should I ask another coach for helping me with Lily?

Choice 1 : Giving back Lily.

Choice 2 : take a coach.

Lily

Take Jack.

You chose Jack which led to the director gives me Jack toys and him bowl, so you can take him home.In home, Jack bites me in the face. I immediately call my director who arrives quickly. I give Jack back and hand in my resignation because I knew I would never able to train another dog again.

Choice 1 : over start

Jack

Take the call.

You chose to take the call which led to we arrive at the crime scene.The body of a woman is lying in an alley. The traces on her neck reveal that she was strangled.The rain begins to fall gradually washing away the invaluable traces.Now I had to decide: should I examine the victim's body in-depth or should I inspect the crime scene?

Choice 1 : Examine the victim.

Choice 2 : Inspect the crime scene.

crime scene

Don't take the call.

You chose not to take the call which led I continued to learn more with my new colleague while discovering the city.It was time for lunch, so went back to the station.

Choice 1 : start over

I stay for helping Laurie.

You chose stay to analyze the sample which led to I discovered the DNA of a killer and after Laurie and I sent the results in the officer in charge of the investigation so that he could arrest the suspect responsible for several murders, I then returned home.

Choice 1 : start over

laboratory

I go home.

You chose go home which led to I took my things from my locker and went home.When I arrived, I made dinner and fell asleep while watching TV.

Choice 1 : start over

Giving back Lily.

You chose to giving back Lily which led to I go to the kennel and return Lily and I decide to resign and apply to a police station.

Choice 1 : start over

take a coach.

You chose to ask to help to a coach which led to me ask an experienced trainer.Lily improves fast and becomes focused.Lily becomes one of the best dogs in the kennel.

Choice 1 : start over

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : start over

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : start over

Examine the victim.

You chose to examine the victim which led to I notice that her handbag is still there, along with her phone and her wallet. I approach the victim, and I see under her nails there are residues, probably the killer's skin. Now I had to decide: should I examine her phone or should send the residue for analysis?

Choice 1 : Examine her phone.

Choice 2 : Send the residue.

body

Inspect the crime scene.

You chose to inspect the crime scene which led to I went to look around.I see no footprints nor blood, and there is no one presents.The rain had washed everything away.

Choice 1 : start over

Examine her phone.

You chose to examine her phone which led to then take her phone but as I try to open it, I realize it was broken during the assault.

Choice 1 : start over

Send the residue.

You chose to send the residue which led to the skin residues are sent to the laboratory. Thanks to the technician's overtime, the result arrive quickly.It is DNA belonging to Oliver Tremblay. He knows for previous misconduct. I go to his last address witch Matich. In the house, a door leads to the basement.Now I had to decide: should I wait for Mathis finish inspecting the second floor or should I go down alone?

Choice 1 : wait for Mathis.

Choice 2 : Go down alone.

basement

wait for Mathis.

You chose wait for Mathis which led to a few second later he arrives, and we carefully go down. Olivier tries to attack me but Mathis arrest him.We handcuff him and take him to the police station.

Choice 1 : start over

Go down alone.

You chose to go down alone which led to I go down alone to fear that the perpetrator might escape. Once the bottom of the stairs, I hear a noise behind me, a sens of dread setting in. By the time I turn around, I receive a blow to the head... and then nothing.

Choice 1 : start over