My-life-depends-on-two-choices.

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Choice count: 32

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 42

Field Related Analysis

Education : 75 matches

(cegep, choice, course, don, exam, failed, field, management, professor, social, task, teacher, unit, university)

Business : 28 matches

(administration, business, businesses, client, clients, company, financial, firm, management, marketing, money, pay, sell)

Film : 12 matches

(experience, finance, marketing, theory, title)

Target Structure: (1 matches)

internship (10 matches)

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My-life-depends-on-two-choices.

My future.

I am 19 years old. I am finishing my Cegep in one month, I have been accepted in Administration. Since I was a kid I want to go there, I like everything in the program, management, marketing, finance. On the other side, at the moment, I am running a business, detailing car with a mobile unit, it has a lot of potential , and I always want to grow a business by myself.

Choice 1 : Go full time in detailling car.

Choice 2 : Give this section a short title.

School

Go full time in detailling car.

Now that I put all my energy in my businesses, I do have to make a choice, I have too much work that is going in. Do I need some people to help me and I do more management or I keep going alone.

Choice 1 : Employees.

Choice 2 : Work more.

Cleaning car

Employees.

Now that I employed two guys, I need to make another choice, I think they have a pretty good work ethic, I want to know if they can be independent, do I continue managing them or I let them be independent.

Choice 1 : Manage them.

Choice 2 : Let them be independant.

Manage

Manage them.

This summer turned pretty good for a new business, now that winter arrive, and that I don't have a garage, I can't do job anymore . It means no more money coming in. I don't have enough money to pay my guys, I need to sell my business.

Choice 1 : Start over.

No money

Let them be independant.

I give them all my confidence on them, I thought they would make good works, but I was wrong, I lost clients because of bad qualities on the job.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Work more.

I accept every client. I work around 90 hours a week to serve all of my clients, I am tired of working, I became in depression, I need to sell the business.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Going at the university in September.

I choose to go to the university, I think it is the best choices for my future career, but now I need to choose my program, I am interesting in two, finance or management, I heard that finance was very hard.

Choice 1 : Choose management.

Choice 2 : Choose Finance.

University

Choose Finance.

I choose finance, I like it, but the next exam is difficult and I need to understand, I need to do something or the university will kick me out, I know that some teacher can help me.

Choice 1 : Go see my professor to understand.

Choice 2 : Work more.

Finance

Go see my professor to understand.

He explained me all the theory in the course, I am not sure if he was right, he was a little bit freaky. I don't know if I will listen to him.

Choice 1 : Don't listen.

Choice 2 : Study the last exam.

Teacher

Work more.

At the moment I am studying a lot, I have no social life. My friends are telling me they would like to see my tonight, but the exam is tomorrow and I am not sure if I am fully ready.

Choice 1 : Go see friends.

Choice 2 : Study the last exam.

Work more

Don't listen.

He was too mysterious for me, I did not listen to him, but he was fully right. I failed my exam and I got kicked out of the program.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Don't listen

Study the last exam.

I study a lot for this exam and I succeed it. Now the next step is to work for someone and get a good experience in this domain. I know that my cousin is working in the financial planification and he is willing to take me one summer with him, or I get an internship and tries something other.

Choice 1 : Get an internship.

Choice 2 : Work with my cousin.

Study

Get an internship.

I finally got an internship in a big firm, I like the job but the boss is very weird, he is making me weird task that make no sense on what I am supposed to work on, he needs to stop abusing me.

Choice 1 : Listen to the boss.

Choice 2 : Don't listen to the boss.

Internship

Work with my cousin.

I will work for my cousin all summer, and make my career in this field, this is what I really like in my life.

Choice 1 : Suceed

Market

Go see friends.

I choose to go see my friends, they are happy to see me, I like those moments but I am very stressed for the exam. I failed it, it was not a good choice.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Listen to the boss.

I listen to my boss in those weird tasks, he kept abusing me, I finally quit because it was too much for me, I didn't succeed my internship.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Don't listen to the boss.

I stop listening to him, he was angry about this and he kicked me out of the internship, I can't continue in this program because of this.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Choose management.

I choose management, I think it is a good choice, this looks like a good program, after a few months, I was tired and it was not exciting me anymore, I think I need to quit and go in finance.

Choice 1 : Choose Finance.

Choice 2 : Continue management.

Management

Continue management.

I finally decided to continue management. I am tired of this theory course on management, I am at the step where I need to make an internship to finish my program, or I quit everything.

Choice 1 : Left this program.

Choice 2 : Get an internship.

Tired

Left this program.

I left the program, but now I need to restart from the beginning.

Choice 1 : Start over.

Failed

Get an internship.

I got an internship and I love it, everything is perfect, I got engaged and currently I am working for this company.

Choice 1 : Suceed

Internship