End of the cegep.

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Choice count: 31

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis

Education : 56 matches

(cegep, choice, compensation, degree, don, field, guidance, guidance counselor, learned, project, semester, student, teacher, trainee, university)

Tourism : 17 matches

(apartment, beach, bearing, climate, compensation, construction, field, human, natural)

Dance : 16 matches

(adjust, back, couple, natural, number, position, rock, run, show)

Target Structure: (20 matches)

abolished (1 match)

compensation (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

hr (1 match)

intern (2 matches)

internship (5 matches)

learned the ropes (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

overwhelmed (1 match)

compensation package (1 match)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

though (2 matches)

trainee (1 match)

undermined (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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End of the cegep.

A complicated choice.

It was my last semester of cegep in Natural Science. I was a straight A's student. I did not know what to do for university, I always had an interest in the field of construction. After a couple meetings with the guidance counselor, I discovered I also had an interest in human anatomy.

Choice 1 : Be a doctor.

Choice 2 : Be a building engineer.

school

Be a doctor.

I applied in medicine in a lot of universities, and I was accepted to do the interviews in only one, when I went to do it, everything was horrible. I lost all of my words. After a few weeks, they called to announce me that I was rejected...

Choice 1 : Start over

doctor

Be a building engineer.

At the end of the BAC, I needed to choose an internship. I wanted to stay in Sherbrooke, because it's the easiest way. I also wanted to go to gaspesie to help on a project that creates eco-friendly housing for the tourist.

Choice 1 : Go to Sherbrooke.

Choice 2 : Go to Gaspesie.

building

Go to Sherbrooke.

After a couple weeks, I learned the office politics. Everyone needed to do overtime to be appreciated by the boss. Everything I was doing was incorrect, and I was tired. I needed to calculate the number of load-bearing walls in each project. My coworker and I were talking about the job climate. I looked so happy about the job, but I wanted to tell the boss that I was not happy with the ambiance.I undermined him.

Choice 1 : Tell the boss.

Choice 2 : Don't tell the boss.

office

Go to Gaspesie.

Everyone was so nice at this job, I made a lot of new friends, I learned the ropes so fast. I was working on the plans and to see if the schedule was respected, with another boy who was a trainee. We went on the construction site, and after he purposed to go see the pierced rock.

Choice 1 : Go with him.

Choice 2 : Not go with him.

pierced rock

Tell the boss.

I decided to be less rude with their employees. After the end of the day, I went in his office, and he was flirting with his secretary. I ran. The morning after, he came to see me. I was so angry, because he was a liar. He fired me even though I was just an intern. He didn't even got me a compensation package.

Choice 1 : Start over

boss and secretary

Don't tell the boss.

I was so overwhelmed. At the end of my internship, the boss proposed me a job. There was a vacant position. I immediately refused, I knew it was a dead-end job. He was insistent, he also promised to give me a premium wage.

Choice 1 : Refuse the job.

Choice 2 : Accept the job.

office

Go with him.

I had a very good evening. We went walking on the beach. We took an ice cream. I thought I was falling in love with him. He wanted to sleep on the beach even though we had a big day to work the next day. We needed to explain our new proposition to imperialize the houses.

Choice 1 : Sleep on the beach.

Choice 2 : Don't sleep on the beach.

ice cream

Not go with him.

He said it was good, but he had a weird glance. The morning after, we worked on the project. He was trying to show me something on my computer, and he spilled his coffee on my clothes and my computer. He laughed. I needed to show my work to my boss this day. Since this time, I abolished coffee.

Choice 1 : Improvise the presentation.

Choice 2 : Tell the boss what he did.

coffee

Refuse the job.

I refused, and the boss said to my teacher that I needed to do another internship because I was a bad intern.

Choice 1 : Start over

man

Accept the job.

I accepted. The job as so boring, but I had a good wage, so I decided to retire at a young age. My mortgage was finished because the pension was a good amount.

Choice 1 : The end!

old woman

Sleep on the beach.

We woke up so late the morning after. Jay was driving so fast, and he was not paying attention on the road. He was on his phone because he needed to finish the project. I asked him many times if he wanted me to drive, and he always replied, no I'm good. I was scared. It's at this moment that we crashed into another car. We were at only five minutes from work!

Choice 1 : Run to work.

Choice 2 : Stay with Jay.

beach

Don't sleep on the beach.

I didn't want to sleep on the beach because we had a long day the following day. I went back to my apartment. It's at this moment that I realized that I liked him very much.

Choice 1 : The end!

heart

Run to work.

I ran so fast. When I arrived, my boss had so many questions. She understood. She thought we made a great job for the project. She gave us a raise.

Choice 1 : The end!

run

Stay with Jay.

He was so sad for me, he was so sorry.The tow truck went at the same time my phone was back alive again. I was 19 missing calls from my boss. She was not happy, and she fired us. I was clueless on what I was supposed to do.

Choice 1 : Go back to my hometown.

Choice 2 : Rest with Jay in Gaspesie.

tow truck

Go back to my hometown.

I went to Sherbrooke, but I was thinking about Jay all day. He said it was to complicate to keep a distance relationship. We broke up.

Choice 1 : The end!

broken heart

Rest with Jay in Gaspesie.

I was in Gaspesie, and many years later we were living in the same house. We worked at the same job!

Choice 1 : The end!

couple

Improvise the presentation.

Everyone was so impressed about my presentation! The boss offered me an opportunity at her company.

Choice 1 : The end!

applaud

Tell the boss what he did.

The boss dis not cared at all. She tells me to adjust my problems alone. She was to busy planning the surveying of an apartment. I was not happy with her response. I didn't want to talk to her again. The HR will be against me.

Choice 1 : Quit the internship.

Choice 2 : Rest to obtain my degree.

goofy

Quit the internship.

I went to Thailand. This backpack trip was all I needed. I learned so much.

Choice 1 : The end!

backpack

Rest to obtain my degree.

A couple months later, I got my degree! It was not easy, but I made it!

Choice 1 : The end!

graduation