To Leave A Doll's House.
A hypertext narrative by
Ann-Marie Lopez-Esquivel
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Word count: 254
Choice count: 6
Section count: 3
Image count: 3
Error count: 2
Field Related Analysis
Law : 11 matches
(brothel, children, house, living, local, option)Education : 10 matches
(choice, don, failing, guidance, head)Early Childhood Education : 6 matches
(children, doll, guidance)Target Structure: (1 matches)
fulfillment (1 match)
To Leave A Doll's House.
Toxic Torvald.
After much begging, Torvald finally realized my mind was set: I didn't have any other choice but to leave my doll house and doll life. Everything I thought was real was actually a facade, and I needed to find my own path to achieve a self-fulfillment. Without it, I'd never be truly free and true to myself. I felt ill-equipped as a mother, and I don't know what my future holds. So, should take my children with me or leave them behind?
Choice 1 : Finding Myself BY Myself!
Choice 2 : Living day to day now.
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Finding Myself BY Myself!
Shortly after leaving my old life behind, including my children, I ran out of funds to support myself. I've had little luck finding help or guidance in this "new" life, and I don't know what to do. The only option I have left to earn money for food and, sometimes, a place to rest my head at night, is illicit work in a local brothel. I'm terrified for my life, and I miss my children, yet I'm not sure if they will even accept me if I returned!
Choice 1 : Living day to day now.
Choice 2 : Maybe things will get better if I stay and save more money for now.
