The-help-of-parents

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The-help-of-parents

The 5 AM Panic.

My alarm screamed at 4:30 AM. The final biology exam was in three hours, and my notes were a blur of stress-filled scribbles. I couldn’t remember the difference between mitosis and meiosis. My hands were shaking. Then, my hune lit up. A text from Mom: Good luck today, my brilliant girl. Just breathe. You are more ready than you think. Se are already proud of you. Love you. Tears pricked my eyes. It was the lifeline I didn’t know I needed. Should I call her right now, crying with relief, or should I save my voice to ace this exam and make her proud !

Choice 1 : What if I fail the exam.

Choice 2 : What if I pass the exam.

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What if I fail the exam.

Here the worst choice is falling the exam but you always can do it again!

Choice 1 : What if I fail the exam.

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What if I pass the exam.

Here is the choice that everybody will take because it’s so important to have degree and make your parents proud!

Choice 1 : What if I pass the exam.

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