pretty-normal-or-almost

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leyla jovin

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Word count: 1051

Choice count: 30

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 37

Field Related Analysis

Law : 36 matches

(action, blood, child, children, direction, documents, minutes, month, office)

Education : 35 matches

(attention deficit hyperactivity, autism, choice, don, faith, reading, student)

Business : 23 matches

(business, deficit, office)

Target Structure: (4 matches)

background check (1 match)

intern (2 matches)

internship (1 match)

though (1 match)

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pretty-normal-or-almost

a new life.

I was doing an internship at Direction of Youth Protection. I was working with children that have attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) and autism spectrum I want to go to the restroom, but I have to see my supervisor.

Choice 1 : go to the restroom.

Choice 2 : go to see my supervisor.

new start

go to the restroom.

This department was really pretty. They have a big snoezelen room. I was making observation about the kids then I heard a kid scream. It was pretty common that a child scream, but it wasn't a normal scream. Should I went toward the scream or should I mind my business.

Choice 1 : restroom break.

Choice 2 : go to the child.

hallway

go to see my supervisor.

When I saw my supervisor in her office, she was waiting for me with a big smile. She was a sweet old lady. I was guessing that the children might like her. She was telling me that it was nice to have an intern, it been a while that they didn't have one. While she was doing an usual background check, we heard a scream for what it seemed a child. She told me to stay, but should I go with her or stay in the office.

Choice 1 : mind my business.

Choice 2 : go with my supervisor.

office

restroom break.

After doing what I did, I went to the office, but my supervisor wasn't there Should I waited for her or should I walked toward her.

Choice 1 : stay in the office.

Choice 2 : searching.

restroom

go to the child.

When I walked toward the scream, I saw what it seemed to be a child and my supervisor. I was perplexed, because the child didn't a human appearance. Should I talk to my supervisor or go to the office.

Choice 1 : go to the office 2.

Choice 2 : talk with her.

a creepy child

go with my supervisor.

She told me to stay in the office because it wasn't my job. After a few minutes went by and she came back and we start doing an action plan.

Choice 1 : the end.

office

mind my business.

While I was minding my business, I started drawing. After a while, my supervisor went back after a few minutes and we start talking.

Choice 1 : the end.

office

stay in the office.

after waiting for a while, she went back.

Choice 1 : the end.

office

searching.

When I started walking toward my supervisor, the light went off. I was scared. When I turn around, the hallway was longer than I remember. Should I go to the office or search my supervisor.

Choice 1 : go to the office 2.

Choice 2 : search her

hallway

go to the office 2.

When I take a look of the room, it wasn't normal. It had a little light in the corner of the room even though the room was pitch black. When I walked toward the light, it started flashing and it went normal.

Choice 1 : the end 2.

office

talk with her.

When I saw her, I touched her shoulder, she turned around. She didn't have any eyes, she only had two mini holes and the rest was her skin. Then the light went off. Should I go to the office or to the nearest room.

Choice 1 : go to the office 2.

Choice 2 : nearest room.

weird

the end.

After doing the action plan she told me it was nice to meet and she was exciting see me more.

Choice 1 : the end.

smilling woman

nearest room.

When I went to the nearest room, it was strange room with weird symbols and all kind of documents all around the room. I wasn't normal to have this room in this building especially with children. Should I take a look for the document or should I leave the building.

Choice 1 : take a look.

Choice 2 : leave the building.

the end 2.

After telling my supervisor what I saw, she told me it was normal and shouldn't happen again in the future. I was still skeptical, but at least they were no problem for now.

Choice 1 : the end 2.

woman

take a look.

When I take a look in the document, it was written about a student that will be sacrificed for the sake of the direction and about my supervisor. What was I reading. It was supposed to be me? What should I do?? Should I go home or should I tell the police.

Choice 1 : go home.

Choice 2 : go tell the police.

document

leave the building.

When I walked toward the exit, I hear my name in the office. I was petrified because it wasn't a human voice but I was still curious Should I go back to the office or should I go home.

Choice 1 : go to the office final.

Choice 2 : go home.

exit

go to the office final.

When I went back to the office, I saw the creature with my supervisor. She looked at me with her hole and she told me, "you are the one, we need you for the sake of this building. We need your blood" before I could say a word, the creature knock me up and lost conscious.

Choice 1 : the sacrifice.

woman and kid

go tell the police.

When I called the police, they told me that I was a crazy because who in the world would sacrifice a young intern in the DYP for no reason. I tried to tell them that it was real and I could show them. They hang up. I was defeated. When I turned around I saw the same creature and knocked me up.

Choice 1 : the sacrifice.

bus stop

go home.

When I went to the bus stop, I was relieved that everything is behind me But I don't know if I should talk that to anyone....

Choice 1 : restart

bus stop

the sacrifice.

When I became aware. I was tied and my month was covered with tape. I was in a strange room with weird symbols. People with a black costume started singing a weird song about a ritual and human sacrifice. I knew my faith. My curiosity got the worst of me.

Choice 1 : restart

ritual