A Future and Interesting Life.

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Eddy El Dib

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Word count: 1778

Choice count: 32

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 3

Field Related Analysis

Education : 87 matches

(choice, college, course, don, down, education, field, first, grades, high school, learn, learned, management, motivation, school, skills, trainee, training, university)

Tourism : 27 matches

(association, australia, average, bias, city, competition, field, food, guide, hotel, natural)

Law : 26 matches

(bias, capital, corruption, court, development, family, government, harassment, judge, local, offer, office, option, passport, process)

Target Structure: (31 matches)

abolish (1 match)

bias (2 matches)

comes in handy (3 matches)

dead-end job (3 matches)

drudgery (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

in-depth (3 matches)

ins-and-outs (2 matches)

invaluable (4 matches)

lack of (1 match)

learn the ropes (3 matches)

maddening (1 match)

office politics (2 matches)

on-the-job-training (5 matches)

overtime (1 match)

premium wage (3 matches)

sexual harassment (1 match)

straight a's (3 matches)

the drive of work (2 matches)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

trainee (2 matches)

undermine (2 matches)

wage (5 matches)

corruption (1 match)

ingrained (1 match)

bribe (1 match)

theft (1 match)

threats (1 match)

volunteering (1 match)

abroad (12 matches)

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A Future and Interesting Life.

You Finish High School.

You finished high school in Saint-Maxim School in Laval. You're stressing. You don't know where to go. All of your friends are going in different places. You have two days to pick which college to go. You hesitate between going in Natural Science at Bois-de-Boulogne College or travel the world.

Choice 1 : Go to Bois-de-Boulogne College.

Choice 2 : Travel Around the World.

Saint-Maxime

Go to Bois-de-Boulogne College.

You're now studying Natural Science. You're doing an amazing job. You're working so hard. You're focused in your studies, you don't get distracted by people or by your phone, and you're super diligent. You managed to pull of straight A's thanks to your time management skills. Although it's hard and really maddening, you didn't give up. But there is something off. You feel lonely. You have no one to talk to, and you start becoming depressed. You are scared that it might affect your grades.

Choice 1 : Make New Friends at School.

Choice 2 : Remain Focus in Solitude.

Bois-de-Boulogne

Travel Around the World.

You decided to travel the world. You want to discover every inch of the world. You don't know where though. You manage to convince your parents and the said yes. So, you decided to visit your family in Australia, but your mom proposed you to work abroad to discover the world and people at same time.

Choice 1 : Go to Australia to See Your Family.

Choice 2 : Go Abroad to Work.

world

Make New Friends at School.

You made a lot of friends, and they gave you the motivation to keep going to school. You finished college, and now you are ready to go to university, but you don't know which university to go to. You have the choice to go to McGill University in the medicine field or Polytechnique of Montreal in engineering.

Choice 1 : Apply to McGill University.

Choice 2 : Apply to Polytechnique of Montreal University

friends

Remain Focus in Solitude.

You decided to stay alone which made you quit college. You are now lost and don't know what to do in life.

Choice 1 : Start Again

lost

Go to Australia to See Your Family.

You decided to go to Australia to see your family. You saw your brothers and sisters. Your aunts and uncles. The fed you and gave you a place to sleep in. But you saw that could not stay like this and decided to work abroad.

Choice 1 : Go Abroad to Work.

Choice 2 : Go Back Home for Good.

Australia

Go Abroad to Work.

You are now volunteering Abroad. You applied for a local association which helps country in development. They go help in Asia, Africa, and South America. So, you chose one of them.

Choice 1 : Go to Africa to Work.

Choice 2 : Go to South America to Work.

Choice 3 : Go to Asia to Work.

Associaion

Apply to McGill University.

You manage to finish university at McGill with straight A's, and you are looking for a job. You applied everywhere, and waited for a response. SCM Hospital and CHUM Hospital responded.

Choice 1 : Go to SCM

Choice 2 : Go to CHUM.

McGill

Go to Polytechnique of Montreal.

You manage to finish university at Poytechnique of Montreal with straight A's, and you are looking for a job. You applied everywhere, and waited for a response. Tetra Tech Engineering company and Bouthillette Parizeau Engineering company responded.

Choice 1 : Tetra Tech Engineering company

Choice 2 : Bouthillette Parizeau Engineering company.

Polyechnique de Montreal

Go to Africa to Work.

So, you went working abroad in Africa, more specifically in Senegal to help the people there. The work last three months, and the hotel and food are already paid. There isn't a premium wage or anything. Just an average salary, and not to forget to mention that it's a dead-end job where you are in a position that offers no hope of progress, but you learn so much. You learn in-depth how to help people. They offer an on-the-job-training for new employees, and give a guide which comes in handy. You have to learn the ropes at first, and then you're free to go. You learn invaluable memories. Suddenly you get really sick, and end up in the hospital. You stayed there, but unfortunately you didn't wake up.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Africa

Go to Asia to Work.

So, you went working abroad in Asia, more specifically in Cambodia to help the people there. The work last three months, and the hotel and food are already paid. There isn't a premium wage or anything. Just an average salary, and not to forget to mention that it's a dead-end job where you are in a position that offers no hope of progress, but you learn so much. You learn in-depth how to help people. They offer an on-the-job-training for new employees, and give a guide which comes in handy. You have to learn the ropes at first, and then you're free to go. You learn invaluable memories. One day, you went with the association to eat in the street of the capital city of Cambodia. You've got threats by native, but you don't know the reason. When you go buy something, they always try to bribe you, and at the end, a theft stole your passport, bag, and wallet.

Choice 1 : Start Again

theft

Go to South America to Work.

So, you went working abroad in South America, more specifically in Colombia to help the people there. The work last three months, and the hotel and food are already paid. There isn't a premium wage or anything. Just an average salary, and not to forget to mention that it's a dead-end job where you are in position that offers no hope of progress, but you learn so much. You learn in-depth how to help people. They offer an on-the-job-training for new employees, and give a guide which comes in handy. You have to learn the ropes at first, and then you're free to go. You learn invaluable memories. You've met a little kid with the biggest smile when you brought him some food. You almost cried of happiness. You're so excited to tell your family back home, but in the same time you want to continue.

Choice 1 : Go Back Home to See Your Family.

Choice 2 : Stay Abroad and Work.

Colombia

Happy Ending and a Happy Life.

You got accepted in this hospital which is near you. You get an on-the-job-training, and I made a new friend who helped me to find the ins-and-outs about my job. They call "the new trainee 1", because there is another new trainee which he is working while being interned. My boss is definitely not bias towards anyone. I think he is real just with everyone. My wage is pretty good, I'm not complaining about that. You live your life after that. You got married, and had kids.

Choice 1 : Start Again

SCM

Go to CHUM Hospital.

You were accepted to work at CHUM hospital. At first, it was nice, and all bu he more worked there the you felt inferior to the others. Your co-workers were making sarcastic jokes to undermine your working process. Which led to worse results. Not to forget to mention that the office politics are crazy. It's like a competition. Everyone tries to put down everyone else to look the best in the eyes of the boss. You start to think that working at SCM was the better choice.

Choice 1 : Go to SCM

Choice 2 : Stay at CHUM

CHUM

Good Ending With a Good Life.

You got accepted in Terra Tech company. You get an on-the-job-training, and you made a new friend who helped you to find the ins-and-outs about your job. They all you "the new trainee 1", because there is another new trainee which he is working while being interned. My boss is definitely not bias towards anyone. I think he is real just with everyone. My wage is pretty good, I'm not complaining about that. You live your life after that. You got married, and had kids.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Tetra Tech

Bouthillette Parizeau Engineering company.

You were accepted o work at Bouthillette Parizeau. A first, it was nice, and all but he more you worked there the more you felt inferior to the others. Your co-workers were making sarcastic jokes to undermine your working process. Which led o worse results. Not o forget to mention that he office politics are crazy. It's like a competition. Everyone tries to put down everyone else to look the est in the eyes of the boss. You star to think that working at Terra Tech was the better option.

Choice 1 : Go to Tetra Tech Engineering company

Choice 2 : Continue with same compagny

Bouthillette Parizeau

Go Back Home to See Your Family.

You decided to go back home, and tell everyone your experience. You said that it was a job that you loved and that you will do it again a hundred times. The drive of work was so low you didn't feel that you were working. Let alone the atmosphere which was beautiful. Of course, sometimes it's sad, because of the lack of medication, clean water, education, and stability. The hard work you put makes you forget your sadness. Overtime you'll feel better. You just feel that you want to change the world, and abolish the evil in this world, and establish the good. The fulfillment that you will feel after those 3 months of hard work is invaluable. You just want to return, and do even more.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Joy

Stay Abroad and Work.

You decided to stay abroad, and learned more about the people in Colombia. You see poverty, corruption ingrained in the government, dirty water, and many more. People steal, kill, and worse. But people, especially kids always have a smile. The drudgery you always kept is even stronger. The drive of work is of course even tougher than better, but you tell yourself it's for their future.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Abroad

Bad Ending and a Bad Life.

You stayed in the place, and experienced worst that before. You got sucked up in a sexual harassment incident. The victim said you were trying to flirt with her and touched her. In reality, you didn't anything, but the judge said other ways. You got to court, and get sentenced for 5 years.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Jail

Go Back Home for Good.

You returned home without accomplishing anything. You are now alone and don't know what to do in life.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Lost