Doctor.

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Neïla Boumechhour

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Word count: 736

Choice count: 34

Section count: 24

Image count: 24

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis

Education : 104 matches

(choice, classes, college, don, education, failing, field, grades, graduate, high school, motivation, school, semester, student, teachers, university)

Web development : 20 matches

(drop, extend, field, pass, plane, switch)

Sociology : 18 matches

(average, education, rate, school)

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Doctor.

Which college to choose.

I’m a seventeen-year old high school student. I want to go to college, and I don’t know which one to choose.

Choice 1 : Dawson.

Choice 2 : Ahunstic.

Dawson.

Since I’ve been in this school, I’ve been struggling a lot with my science classes. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Drop the classes I’m failing.

Choice 2 : Keep the classes i’m failling.

Drop the classes I’m failing.

I finally dropped the classes I was failing, and I took them for the next semester.

Choice 1 : Pass all my classes.

Keep the classes i’m failling.

I kept all the classes I was failing, and I decided to change program.

Choice 1 : Change program.

Pass all my classes.

The semester is finally over. I know I passed all of my classes, but I don’t know if I was excellent or average.

Choice 1 : Average grades.

Choice 2 : Excellent grades.

Change program.

I got sick of my bad grades and terrible R rate. I choose to switch program. Natural Science wasn’t the right program for me.

Choice 1 : The End

Average grades.

All of my grades were average and My R rate is at 28. To be accepted in a medical program in university in Canada, my R rate needs to be at 36. I have to extend my school studies and go in another program to rise my grades. I need to do all of that to be accepted in the medical studies.

Choice 1 : Try universities in Europe.

Choice 2 : Change program.

Excellent grades.

My grades are excellent this semester, and I got a 37 R rate. With those incredible grades I can get into any university for my medical studies. I got accepted at McGill University and Stanford. I don’t know which school to choose.

Choice 1 : McGill.

Choice 2 : Stanford.

Try universities in Europe.

I decided to take my chances and try to be accepted in the medical field.

Choice 1 : Graduate.

Choice 2 : Get in a plane crash.

Europe

Change program.

Maybe I’m not meant to be a doctor. I switch programs to be in the education field.

Choice 1 : The end

Teacher

Get in a plane crash.

I was on my way to a university in London. The plane started to move very fast, and then it crashed into the ocean. I die.

Choice 1 : The end

Plane crash

Graduate.

When I arrived at the University of London. They accepted me in the medical studies. Ten years later, I’m a doctor living in London.

Choice 1 : The end

University of London

McGill.

I decided to go into McGill University for my medical studies.

Choice 1 : Drop out.

Choice 2 : Bad grades.

McGill

Stanford.

I decided to go into Stanford University for my medical studies.

Choice 1 : Graduate.

Stanford

Drop out.

I decided to drop out of school because it’s too hard for me.

Choice 1 : The end

Bad grades.

Since I got here, I’ve been hanging out with some old friends, because of that my grades got lower.

Choice 1 : Continue to persevere.

Choice 2 : Kicked out of school.

Continue to persevere.

I decided to persevere and bring back my good grades. I got rid of those bad friends. Ten years later, I’m a doctor working in a hospital.

Choice 1 : The end

Doctor

Kicked out of school.

I kept hanging out with those bad friends and the school kicked me out because I didn’t even bother to go to my classes.

Choice 1 : The end

Graduate.

I graduated from my medical studies ten years ago. I’m now a cardiologist in my own cabinet.

Choice 1 : The end

Graduate

Extend my studies.

I decided to extend my studies because of the bad science teachers.

Choice 1 : Good grades.

Choice 2 : Bad grades.

Ahunstic.

I decided to go to Ahunstic into the Natural Science program.

Choice 1 : Extend my studies.

Choice 2 : Hate it.

Hate it.

Since I’ve been here, I hate it, I don’t like any of my classes. I decided to drop out and find a job.

Choice 1 : The end

Good grades.

I graduate from this program and become a doctor.

Choice 1 : The end

Graduate

Bad grades.

I decided to drop out of school because my bad grades gave me a lack of motivation.

Choice 1 : The end