Word count: 833
Choice count: 5
Section count: 4
Image count: 3
Error count: 15
Field Related Analysis
Food and catering : 27 matches
(chains, curry, delicious, deliver, delivery, dining, dinner, eat, fast, food, meal, night, options, restaurant, scene, table)Archaeology : 26 matches
(bit, gold, green, her, here, keep, section)Law : 19 matches
(accounts, arrested, client, clients, delivery, house, police officer)Target Structure: (0 matches)
Little Red Riding Hood stepped onto the street from the Indian restaurant with her backpack of Uber eats, jumped on her moped and zipped along the street through the leafy suburb towards a regular Friday night clients house when she came across a detour sign due to road works. Although it was possible to merely skip around the roadworks, the sign also pointed to the left which directed her to a street she was not familiar with at all since her mother had always warned her not to go to those suburbs. Those suburbs according to her mother were occupied by hoods and thugs and was by all accounts a dangerous place to go. Red Riding Hood pondered her choice for a moment and then briskly continued her journey. Does Red Riding Hood choose to take the detour or does she choose her usual route?
Choice 1 : The Detour
Choice 2 : Straight Ahead
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices. After a moments hesitation Little Red Riding Hood turns swiftly at the detour, taking the road into the hood. As she zips along the road she passes walls covered with graffiti and hears rap music drifting through open windows. There were people dressed in loose fitting clothing, wearing thick gold chains and braided hair. Little Red Riding Hood is intrigued and fascinated by the scene and finds herself slowing down to take a closer look. Gradually she slows to a stand still and at that moment a bearded man speaks to her and asks if she is lost. Red replies that she is unfamiliar with the area and that she is on her way to deliver dinner to a regular client named Mrs Alexander. The bearded man offers to give her directions to her destination. Does Little Red Riding Hood take directions from the bearded man or does she check her goggle maps?
Choice 1 : Follows Google Maps
Choice 2 : The Detour.
Little Red Riding Hood listens to the bearded man carefully and since she has no clue as to where she is going she decides to take his advice and his directions. With that she again starts her moped and begins her journey again, conscious that the Indian food she is delivering would be getting cold and that she is likely to get a poor rating. Her mother's words about not entering the hood swim around in her head. Nevertheless she has little choice except to continue, so she does. Little Red Riding Hood again zips along the streets and the scene begins to change, the music fades into the background and suddenly she see a familiar landmark and instantly know where she is now. She speeds to her clients house but when she arrives the front door is ajar. Cautiously she walks in, calling her clients name, only to discover her client unconscious and the bearded man standing nearby waiting to snatch the food. Just as he is about to snatch the food a police officer charges through the door and arrested him. The client had apparently activated a personal security alarm which had alerted the police. The elderly client is taken hospital for observation and with no one left to eat the Indian curry, Red makes herself comfortable at the dining room table and eats the curry before returning to work for the next delivery. The End.
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Little Red Riding Hood Considers her options but remembers her mother's warnings about going into the hood and wisely decides to go straight ahead. Anyway she thought, the faster I deliver this food, the faster I'll get back, the fast I can make an another delivery, the more money she would make. She travels along the road towards her clients house with the smell of the curry she was delivering waft up her nose and making her mouth water. It smelt positives, if not a bit dangerous, absolutely delicious. As she travelled she managed to get get green lights all the way saving her a significant amount of time. She arrived at the client's house, a little old lady with plenty of time to spare. The old lady answered the door and :little red Rinding Hood cheerfully handed the meal to her. She asked Red if she would like to eat with her and keep her company for a little while. Red thought for a moment and remembered that she had made good time and wouldn't be due for another delivery an awhile so she hungrily agreed. The two, the old lady and Little Red Riding Hood sat together and ate the curry until there was nothing but the smell of Rogan Josh left. Red then jumped on her moped and returned to work, while the old lady sat down in front of the TV to watch Gardening Australia.
Choice 1 : Leaving the Restaurant.