everyday-life

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Word count: 722

Choice count: 11

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 11

Field Related Analysis

Education : 39 matches

(choice, class, classmates, don, exam, first, school, teacher, university)

Archaeology : 31 matches

(bed, bit, class, her, here, section, study, tell, thing)

Sociology : 18 matches

(class, school, split)

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everyday-life

Everyday life.

I wake up in the morning after a long night of talking to my girlfriend on the phone. She got mad at me because I don't pay school enough attention. Right before falling asleep I promised her that I'll be more motivated in school, but I didn't take the time of when I went to bed in consideration.

Choice 1 : Go to school.

Choice 2 : Stay home.

guy waking up

Go to school.

I've decided that I'll go to school, plus I have an important chemistry class to attend. In a few weeks, I'm going to have my semi-final exam, and I really want to pass this class so me and my girlfriend can apply for the same university at the same time. Lastly, she will be very happy to see me at school and doing the promised efforts.

Choice 1 : Listen in class.

Choice 2 : Mess around with my buddy.

kids going to school

Stay home.

I've decided to stay home. I'm too lazy to attend class. But now, my girlfriend is going to kill me! I told my classmates to lie to her and tell her that I was in class. I'll just tell her that after class I wasn't feeling well, and I went straight back home. I'll call my cousin to see what his up to. Or maybe I should stay home and study since I have a chemistry exam coming up.

Choice 1 : Go check my cousin.

Choice 2 : Stay home and study.

a house

Listen in class.

I was in my chemistry class, and I was doing my best to focus. My friend next to me was nagging me, but I told him to shut up because I was trying to listen. He understood really well and didn't bother me anymore. Thanks to that, I felt ready for my exam and my girlfriend is going to be proud.

Choice 1 : I'm proud of myself.

kids In class

Mess around with my buddy.

I was in my chemistry class, and I was doing my best to stay focus. My friend next to me was nagging me, I fell in the trap, and started goofing around with him. The teacher had to get involve a few times, and even split us up. At the end of the class, I felt a bit guilty because I wasted an opportunity to get ready for my exam and now my girlfriend might get mad at me.

Choice 1 : mess up badly.

messing with my friend

Go check my cousin.

My cousin sent me a message on my phone.He told me that he had a way to make some few dollars, so I figured that I might as well go to make those dollars, so I can give a nice present to apologies to my girl.

Choice 1 : Bad idea!

cousins

Stay home and study.

I messed up by not going to class today. I'll come clean, and apologies to my girl. I give her a call, and she yelled at me for 45 minute straights. After being schooled, she forgave me, and came to my place to study with me. Regardless of me not going to class, I still ended up being ready for my exam.

Choice 1 : I'm proud of myself.

me and my girlfriend

Bad idea!

I went to meet up with my cousin, and the little hustle he was taking about was stealing car parts from an old garage. We jumped the fence of the garage, and started running towards the parts, but the alarm rang and the cops came right away. The police brought me and my cousin in jail, and my girl broke up with me.

Choice 1 : mess up badly.

bad idea

mess up badly.

I mess up badly. I flunk my exam, got in trouble, and now my girl left me. I truly regret not listening to her in the beginning. If I have, I could've had a happy life with her. Instead, I have to pay for my mistakes.

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I'm proud of myself.

I passed my chemistry exam, and my girl is super happy. I decided to put my life first, and not let myself get distracted. Even though sometimes I look for trouble, I manage to do the right thing at the end, and more importantly, my beautiful lady is happy.

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