Ethan's-life-story.

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Word count: 616

Choice count: 8

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 14

Field Related Analysis

Education : 33 matches

(choice, college, don, education, first, grades, high school, school, university)

Web development : 17 matches

(drop, join, parent, select, selected, stop)

Archaeology : 16 matches

(bay, dating, her, here, section, study)

Target Structure: (3 matches)

dead-end job (1 match)

volunteer (1 match)

abroad (1 match)

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Ethan's-life-story.

Apply to college.

After I graduated from high school, I had to choose a College where I would spend 2 years of my life.

Choice 1 : College Maisonneuve.

Choice 2 : Ahuntsic College.

college

College Maisonneuve.

I decided to go to Maisonneuve College since it was near my house, and it only takes 20 minutes to get to. Also, most of my high school friend are going to this College, and they asked me if I wanted to join the football team.

Choice 1 : Join the football team.

Choice 2 : Don't join the football team.

Maisonneuve College

Ahuntsic College.

I decided to go to Ahuntsic College because I wanted to really focus on school and not be distracted by my friend. A few weeks into the school year I met a girl that is interested in me but I don't know if I should date her.

Choice 1 : Date the girl.

Choice 2 : Don't date the girl.

Ahuntsic College

Join the football team.

I joined the football team and I excelled at it. So much that I got recruited to a University in Alberta but that would mean that I will have to leave my family behind.

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football team

Don't join the football team.

While I was sad that I didn't join the football team, I was really happy that I got more time to focus on my education which helped me get really good grades. But now I have to choose what I want to specialize in University.

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University

Date the girl.

I am now dating the girl, but she got pregnant, and now I work at a dead-end job to support my family. I do this for the rest of my life. The end.

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baby

Don't date the girl.

I decide to not date the girl and that decision still haunts me. I couldn't stop thinking about if she was the one for me and that I might've missed my chance with the love of my life. This overthinking led to me not being able to sleep, because of that my grades started to drop, I got rejected from all the university in Montreal. Which is why I decided to work as a waiter for the rest of my life. The end.

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waiter

Decide to go study at Alberta to try to become a professional football player.

My first year in Alberta was really tough and depressing. First I almost got cut from the team, but ultimately I made the team, and I worked my ass off. Although I was doing good in football, I started to feel homesick. I don't know if I should go back home and drop my football career.

Choice 1 : Stay in Alberta.

Choice 2 : Go back to Quebec.

Football

Stay in Alberta.

My teammates were so happy I decided to stay. They were glad that they could have a good wide receiver to play with. Few years later, I entered the NFL draft and got selected by the Tampa Bay Buccaneers. I played in the NFL for 10 year before I retired. Unfortunately, I didn't get to win the Lombardi Trophy. The end.

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Tampa Bay

Go back to Quebec.

I missed my parent so much and I was so happy to see them again. Quitting the football team and letting go of my childhood broke me. I decided to take a gap year to volunteer abroad. I am now in Thailand living my best life, although I still think about what could've been. The end.

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Thailand