My Adventures in Business.

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Lorenzo Montiel

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Word count: 1112

Choice count: 32

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 6

Field Related Analysis

Business : 72 matches

(business, company, deal, entrepreneur, financial, management, money, mortgage, office, pay, sales, team, trainees)

Education : 59 matches

(choice, class, classes, college, discipline, fail, goal, grade, high school, homework, learned, management, school, university)

Accounting : 30 matches

(amount, license, mortgage, pension, purchases, sales)

Target Structure: (25 matches)

abolish (1 match)

comes in handy (1 match)

dead-end job (2 matches)

deter (1 match)

drawback (1 match)

foot in the door (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

income (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

learned the ropes (1 match)

more often (1 match)

mortgage (2 matches)

office politics (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

overtime (3 matches)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

set aside (1 match)

straight a's (2 matches)

more often than not (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

time management (3 matches)

trainees (1 match)

wage (3 matches)

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My Adventures in Business.

The end of high-school.

It was the end of high school. I wasn't sure what to do next. Should apply to Ahuntsic College in their 3-year Business program or do a 2-year pre-university program in Psychology? Which should I choose?

Choice 1 : Apply to the Business program.

Choice 2 : Apply to the Psychology program.

High school

Apply to the Business program.

I always wanted to become an entrepreneur, and I thought that the best way to become one was going to business school.

Choice 1 : Start a sells programe.

Choice 2 : Finish my business program.

business

Apply to the Psychology program.

I hated psychology. I didn't do my homework or come to class. I had terrible time management, and I didn't get the straight A's I had hoped for. I decided to change programs.

Choice 1 : Apply to the Business program.

Failure

Start a sales program.

After, a few sessions at the Business program I was wondering if I should finish the program or start a sales program?

Choice 1 : Study the business program and start the sales pro.

Choice 2 : Finish my business program.

Do the sales program

Finish my Business program.

I decided to finish my business class. And for the next two years I gained no experience in the Business program, and I started to worry if after my program was finished I would be able to get a job with the Business industry since I had gained zero experience.

Choice 1 : Get no experience in the business industry.

Finish my business program

Study the Business program and start the sales pro.

Because I couldn't choose between staying in school and starting the sales program. I decided to do both.

Choice 1 : Get a lot of experience in sales and make a lot of money early on.

Choice 2 : Waste money on the sales program and fail your classes.

Do the sales program

Get no experience in the business industry.

After I finished the program, because the only thing I did was to study I never gained any experience in the Business industry.

Choice 1 : Start in a minimum wage job at Mcdonalds.

Choice 2 : Start the sales program.

Get no experience in the business industry

Start in a minimum wage job at Mcdonalds.

I had to get a dead-end job because I had to earn money to pay for a new program.

Choice 1 : Be exhausted from working overtime.

Choice 2 : Start an independent cleaning business.

Start a minimum wage job at McDonalds

Start the sales program.

I gained no experience during all my studying years, and for that reason I thought that the best decision was to start the sales program.

Choice 1 : Get a lot of experience in sales and make a lot of money early on.

Choice 2 : Waste money on the sales program and fail your classes.

Start the sales program

Be exhausted from working overtime.

I had to work overtime because it was the only job I had. I had bad time management and didn't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Start an independent cleaning business.

Choice 2 : Concentrate in getting the license instead of school.

Be exhausted from working overtime

Start an independent cleaning business.

I then decided that I would set aside my my dead-end job and take a risk and start my own cleaning company.

Choice 1 : Make descent amount of money while doing a lot of work.

Choice 2 : Make a lot of money and expand the business al over Montreal.

Start an independent cleaning business

Get a lot of experience in sales and make a lot of money early on.

I was doing very good in the sales program and found a purpose in this Business. I learned the ropes of the Business and I could now put money for my parents' pension or spend it on whatever I liked.

Choice 1 : Be able to pay for my parents mortgage.

Choice 2 : Make stupid purchases like designer clothes and expensive cars.

Get a lot of experience in sales and make a lot of money early on.

Waste money on the sales program and fail your classes.

I did not have the drive of work to get straight A's at school and could not pull of one good grade. I, either had to fully concentrate to get the license or start a cleaning Business.

Choice 1 : Start an independent cleaning business.

Choice 2 : Concentrate in getting the license instead of school.

Waste money on the sales program and fail your classes.

Be able to pay for my parents' mortgage.

I succeeded in my goal, and now I could afford to take care of my parents in their old age.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Be able to pay for my parents mortgage.

Make stupid purchases like designer clothes and expensive cars and go broke.

I did a lot of stupid financial decisions and for that reason I am now broke and have to start from zero.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Make stupid purchases like designer clothes and sports cars

Concentrate in getting the license instead of school.

School was not going good for me, and I knew that I was never going to get a premium wage from it. I then decided to try my best to get the license.

Choice 1 : Get a lot of experience in sales and make a lot of money early on.

Concentrate in getting the license instead of school.

Make descent amount of money while doing a lot of work because you did not put in the effort.

I got a decent job that made me a fair income, but for all the efforts I was putting I started to deter, and I never got to where I wanted to be because of more often than not I was very lazy.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Make descent amount of money while doing a lot of work.

Make a lot of money and expand the business al over Montreal.

I put a foot in the door taking a risk, and it was worth it. My company got so big that I had to hire new trainees and started to give OJT. I now have a good team witch comes in handy with time management.

Choice 1 : Become filthy rich and make your parents never work again.

Choice 2 : Make stupid purchases like designer clothes and expensive cars and go broke.

Make a lot of money and expand the business al over Montreal.

Become filthy rich and make your parents never work again.

I got to be so rich that I could help my parents' never work again. The lack of discipline would have held me back, but I learned to abolish those bad habits.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Become filthy rich and make your parents never work again.

Become the best sales man and be a millionaire at an early age.

I got so rich at a young age that I can't explain the sensation of fulfillment that I have. I, no longer need to deal with office politics because of all the hard work that I did and because of all the times I had to drawback from things that where not meant to be.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Become the best sales man and be a millionaire at an early age.