The-Omnipotent

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The-Omnipotent

Regards to the long-awaited friend.

Hallow! I'm I'm... I'm dein Bester Freund! I mean. I think I could be your best friend. Yes? Oh, not again. I'm just too excited again! Pope: hi... hmmm. Who are you? Oh, me? Well I just said that yo kiddo! (Do not go nuts again!! It's just talking to a living kiddo!) I wanna make friends with you my sweee Yes. Sweetieee... Pope: I see. You seem just like an old recorded voice. Why can't I see you btw? Old...Recorded...Voice!? (This can't be true.) Well... hmmm. I know your alone too. Just tell me that you be my friend and I'll show you whatever you want to see. Just tell me. Pope: what?

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This is me.