In radio diagnostic technology we trust.

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chelsea stanislas mbango bakop

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Word count: 656

Choice count: 13

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 6

Field Related Analysis

Education : 42 matches

(choice, college, colleges, diagnostic, diploma, don, graduation, head, learn, reader, report, sabbatical, school, social, technology, training, university)

Paramedics : 14 matches

(accident, diploma, heart, heart attack, hospital, pain, report)

Business : 12 matches

(money, promotion, salary, technology, trust, upgrade, value)

Target Structure: (1 matches)

corruption (3 matches)

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In radio diagnostic technology we trust.

The trip start here.

After my diploma of secondary I thought I finished school but guess what? I didn't because that was just a little warm-up. Right away after my graduation, I had no break I had to make some choices so: should I take a sabbatical year and work full time and then go to university at 21 years old?or should I find a college to apply to?

Choice 1 : Take a sabbatical year and work.

Choice 2 : Apply to a college.

Questioning my decision

Take a sabbatical year and work.

I find a job and started to work for about a year, I made a lot of money I had time to party, went out with my friends and enjoyed every moment and by the time I started to consume drugs too ,like I said life was grate. Unfortunately I was obsessed with gambling and drugs so I stopped to go to work.

Choice 1 : I became homeless and after two day I died of heart attack.

Dead person

Apply to a college.

I looked into colleges and two of them really caught my attention. Should I go to Ahuntsic College or Montmorency College.

Choice 1 : Apply to Ahuntsic.

Choice 2 : Apply to Montmorency College

Choice between Ahuntsic and Montmorency

Ahuntsic College.

During this train of 3 years, I made multiple job-on-training to be more confident when it comes to performing my job. After college, I went to Uqam University to get more diplomas so that I could have more money too. After 4 years of being the chair of the university, I found a job at Saint Justine Hospital, I made some friends with many people and all of my coworkers were nice to me. One day, the ex-boyfriend of my boss had a bad accident and was taken to our hospital. My boss hated her ex so badly that she didn't want to save him from his accident, so she proposed to upgrade my salary so that I would let him suffer a little bit. Should I accept? Or should I report the corruption?

Choice 1 : Report the corruption

Choice 2 : Accepted the money

Work

Report the corruption.

I said to my boss with all the respect I have for her, I would not do that because it is not in my value. By chance, my pocket recorded the whole conversation, so I reported it to the head boss, and she got fired from work.

Choice 1 : After reporting.

Report

Accept the money.

I accepted the money because for once a man will learn that we don't break a woman's heart. During their suffering time I took pleasure in seeing her making him feel pain, so I asked my boss if I could make him suffer too, she said yes, and the moment I was about to touch him he died, and in less than 2 minutes police officer were here and we got arrested.

Choice 1 : Go to jail.

Arrested

Montmorency College.

I went into Social Science for about 3 years and when it was time for me to apply to university, I found out that I was pregnant, so I had no choice but to drop out. By chance my baby daddy was richer, so he asked me to not worry and asked me to stop working because he got us. So, I stopped my job and became a home wife.

Choice 1 : Montmorency College.

Drop out

Go to jail.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Accept the money.

Jail

After reporting.

The head boss decided to give me a promotion I was so happy and didn't fall like any of this was for a reel.

Choice 1 : Report the corruption.

Happy end

I became homeless and after two day I died of heart attack.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : The trip start here.

Dead