A questionable retirement.

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Ilyas Tiouidiouine

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A questionable retirement.

The end of high school.

It was the end of high school. My grades were good. I had 2 careers in mind. The first career was pursuing was to become a car mechanic. The second career was to become a chemist. Which should I choose?

Choice 1 : Become a car mechanic.

Choice 2 : Become a chemist.

High school

Become a car mechanic.

So I ended up.

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Become a chemist.

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