My life in your hands.

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Rogelio De La Teja

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Word count: 1174

Choice count: 30

Section count: 22

Image count: 22

Error count: 29

Field Related Analysis

Education : 56 matches

(cegep, choice, college, failed, graduation, head, market, options, private, school, university, vacation)

Business : 48 matches

(abilities, administration, agent, business, company, gain, investment, market, money, offer, office, opportunity, pay, promotion)

Law : 34 matches

(accused, agent, blackmail, contact, corruption, deed, drugs, family, harassment, living, market, offer, office, power, private, proof)

Target Structure: (7 matches)

internship (4 matches)

office politics (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

wage (3 matches)

corruption (1 match)

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My life in your hands.

Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

After my graduation, I have the choice to pursue my studies at HEC business school or to go on the job market to gain some money.

Choice 1 : Go to HEC business school.

Choice 2 : go on the job market to gain some money.

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Go to HEC business school.

Now that I'm in university, I need to choose how I will focus my energy to make it trough. To make it well in school, I will make sure to study hard or to party endlessly.

Choice 1 : study hard.

Choice 2 : party endlessly.

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go on the job market to gain some money.

I want to make some money now that I finished Cegep, I can send my CV's to security recruiters or use my savings in day trading and hopefully make a fortune.

Choice 1 : send my CV's to security recruiters.

Choice 2 : use my savings in day trading and hopefully make a fortune.

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send my CV's to security recruiters.

Now that you have been recruited as an security agent, you need to make sure that you work hard for a promotion or you will be fired.

Choice 1 : chase a promotion.

Choice 2 : get fired.

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use my savings in day trading and hopefully make a fortune.

You bought many books about day trading and with time you feel more confident about your abilities. That's why your wondering if you should take a big risk which could pay big or only risk small and make a decent wage per day.

Choice 1 : take a big risk which could pay big.

Choice 2 : only risk small and make a decent wage per day.

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take a big risk which could pay big.

You risked all your money and by doing so, you lost it all. Because of that, you finish your days in poverty without savings.

Choice 1 : you finish your days in poverty without savings.

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only risk small and make a decent wage per day.

By controlling your impulses and risks, your able to make a decent living of day trading, your able to save money for your retirement. By doing, so you made sure to have something to provide for your family. You finish your days with your family.

Choice 1 : You finish your days with your family.

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you finish your days in poverty without savings.

It could have gone better but also worse.Return to the beginning.

Choice 1 : Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

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You finish your days with your family.

You finish your days with your family. Happy that you make some good decisions that made you that far.Return to the beginning.

Choice 1 : Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

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chase a promotion.

By working hard and not engaging in office politics, you got a promotion as head of security.With this new opportunity comes new responsibilities but also bigger pay.Having found purpose in this career you decide it's now time to begin a family and live happy for the rest of your days.

Choice 1 : You finish your days with your family.

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get fired.

You decided that working wasn't for you so you slept at work many times and came to work drunk. With time human resources received many complains about you, which have been used to make a decision about your situation.They decided to fire and by doing so you ended poor because you spent all your money in alcohol and drugs. You finished your days the same way.

Choice 1 : you finish your days in poverty without savings.

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study hard.

You made sure to study hard, and by doing so you received an internship offer by the end of your studies in a bank as an investment banker.

Choice 1 : an internship as an investment banker.

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party endlessly.

You decided to party everyday like there was no tomorrow, you were drunk most of the time, so you didn't remember what you did. Someone accused you of sexual harassment, because of that you got expelled and ended up in prison without possibly of getting out.

Choice 1 : ended up in prison.

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an internship as an investment banker.

Your internship went well, and because of that you got a job offer in the same company. As time goes by, you saw your boss doing some corruption taking in the office, and you decided if you should contact human resources or blackmail your boss for a better position.

Choice 1 : contact human resources.

Choice 2 : blackmail your boss for a better position.

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ended up in prison.

Accepting that you had bad luck in life you went to sleep in your cell, by doing so a voice in your head gave you two options. To respond to your sins by spending your life in prison or to receive incredible power and do good deed to humanity for eternity.

Choice 1 : spending your life in prison.

Choice 2 : receive incredible power and do good deed to humanity for eternity.

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spending your life in prison.

You decided to spend the rest of your life in prison, this is the result of your bad actions. Return to the beginning.

Choice 1 : Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

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You gained incredible powers.

You gained incredible powers and with them you escaped prison to spend the rest of your life as a vigilante. Return to the beginning.

Choice 1 : Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

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contact human resources.

By giving enough proof, they fired your boss and gave you a promotion as a result. You used this opportunity to give it your all to climb the corporate ladder. One day, you met a nice girl, you're deciding by pursing her or focusing in your work to gain greater wealth.

Choice 1 : pursing her.

Choice 2 : focusing in your work to gain greater wealth.

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blackmail your boss for a better position.

You tried to blackmail your boss but failed as he anticipated your actions, by doing so he put the blame on you and made you go to prison.

Choice 1 : ended up in prison.

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pursing her.

as you courted her, emotions flowed between both of you and you both decided to form a family.

Choice 1 : You finish your days with your family.

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focusing in your work to gain greater wealth.

You gained incredible wealth with time, but you passed all of your days alone.To change of environment you took your private plane that you recently bought and went on a vacation.

Choice 1 : went on a vacation.

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went on a vacation.

As you were in your new plane set to go to Cuba, the plane crashed and you died in an instant without time to enjoyed all the hard earned money that you gained. Maybe you should have focused on less material things. Return to the beginning.

Choice 1 : Graduation at Ahuntsic College in business administration.

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