My life.

A hypertext narrative by

Remily Arroyo Camacho

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Word count: 606

Choice count: 14

Section count: 6

Image count: 6

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis

Education : 50 matches

(certification, choice, coach, college, don, failed, first, goal, high school, knowledge, learn, national, reward, school, social, teacher, technology, test, university)

Police-Technology : 23 matches

(criminal, law, lawyer, national police school, police, spvm)

Sociology : 17 matches

(category, competition, depression, goal, industry, interview, justice, media, petite, school, sector, technology)

Target Structure: (3 matches)

dead-end jobs (1 match)

volunteering (1 match)

abroad (1 match)

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My life.

I just finished high school. I live in Ottawa, and I'm planning a bright future.

I just graduated from Woodroffe High School. I'm 17 years old at the moment.

Choice 1 : I decided to go to Ahuntsic College to study police technology.

Choice 2 : I don't feel like studying. I hate school. Because of that, I will do dead-end jobs for the rest of my life.

Ontario High School

I just graduated from Police Technology from college.

I decided to work for the SPVM. For that, I have to apply online in their website.

Choice 1 : I decided to apply for National Police School.

Choice 2 : I decided to not continue the police path. I decided to apply in university to sudy Criminal Law

My police graduation

I just graduated from my 3 months of the National Police School.

I applied to work for the SPVM.

Choice 1 : The SPVM did not not accepts me because I failed the interview test.

Choice 2 : I just got accepted in the SPVM. I got accepted in the police station 35 , located in the Petite-Patrie.

Choice 3 : After months of waiting for an answer from the SPVM, I decided to use that time as an opportunity to travel the world.

Choice 4 :  I got rejected from the SPVM, I decided to become a correctional agent in Québec.

SPVM logo

I decided to not continue the police path. I decided to apply in university to study Criminal Law.

I realized that I don't want to be a cop anymore. Because I have a lot of knowledge in law and justice, I decided to apply at Concordia University, located in Montreal. I decided to do Criminal Law.

Choice 1 : I love my university lifesltyle, but I realized that I do not want to study law anymore . I decided to change programs and study with the goal of becoming an ESL teacher.

Choice 2 : I don't like university. I got depressed. Furthermore, I don't feel exited anymore.

Concordia University located in Montreal, Canada

Depression.

I don't know what I want in life.I don't want to be a lawyer, and don't want to be a cop. Likewise, I think that I lost plenty of time. Not only that, but I decided to dropout of University. Furthermore, I'm not interested of studying anymore. I feel lost.

Choice 1 : I need a break from everything and just help others. For that reason, I go to volunteering abroad, specifically in Honduras, South America. There I would help the people in farming and at schools.

Choice 2 : I realized that I have a lot of knowledge in the fitness industry. It's been 7 years since I do bodybuilding and I have a fit body. Thanks to that, I decided to get a certification to become a bodybuilding coach. With that certification, I can learn to do the proper exercises, how to make diets, and how to make plans and routine depending on people's need.

Feeling lost and depressed

Bodybuilding.

Because of my social media following, I was able to go from being a hard-core coach for two years to an online bodybuilding coach. I made the decision to compete in a bodybuilding competition in the wellness category in order to obtain more experience and recognition in the fitness sector.

Choice 1 : I took first position. I feel so good about myself. I was awarded a $10,000 reward.

Choice 2 : I was defeated. I came in fifth place. It was nonetheless, in my opinion, a singular experience. The other athletes had superior physical attributes and were more seasoned. I'm happy that I could compete with them. Two years later, more prepared, I'll take part.

My first bodybuilding show in the Wellness Category