Raphals-Tragic-Career-As-a-Disgrace-Police-Officer

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Raphals-Tragic-Career-As-a-Disgrace-Police-Officer

I need to choose a cegep program.

I just finished High School with straight A's. I don't know if I want to help people as a police officer and study Police Technology or become a big and strong firefighter. What should I choose?

Choice 1 : Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

Choice 2 : Fire safety Technology

High School

Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

I decided to apply at Ahuntsic College in Police Technology, I am excited to help others! Now that I am in Police Technology, should I Study that hard? I am sure to be hired anyway.

Choice 1 : I decided to Study as hard as I could.

Choice 2 : I should have Study a bit harder.

Police

Fire safety Technology at Montmorency College.

I have Applied at Montmorency College. My Friends are now asking me how to put down a fire, I haven't started the program, but I don't want to let them down, should I lie or tell the truth?

Choice 1 : They Think I am Genius... Until...

Choice 2 : Tell the truth and nothing but the truth

firefighter

I decided to Study as hard as I could.

I worked so hard I finished cegep with excellent grades, I can apply wherever I want, but with so many options, where should I go?

Choice 1 : S.P.V.M.

Choice 2 : S.Q

Good grades

I should have Study a bit harder.

Unfortunately, I didn't work hard enough, I had such bad grades, that my peers undermined my talent and I quit police Technology out of shame. I Need to find a way to still live, but how???

Choice 1 : I apply as a mall cop

Choice 2 : I asked my parents to feed me.

Choice 3 : I start a pyramidal scheme

Write a choice here.

The fall of the great pyramidal scam.

I got arrested while trying to recruit four new members, they we're undercover cops. They handcuffed me and brought me to jail.

Choice 1 : Plead guilty

Choice 2 : I try to escape

Paul Blart 2.0.

I am now working as a mall cop at Galerie d'Anjou, what a Life! I am grumpy old man who tells bystanders how great of a top I would have been. Today while, patrolling, a store is being robed in front of me, should I do something?

Choice 1 : I ditch my uniform

Choice 2 : I do my job and try to stop the robber

Paul Blart

I asked my parents to feed me.

My parents denied me and put me on the street. There is me and a box, but it moves and barks, there is a dog, what should I do with him?

Choice 1 : I keep him and name him Mr. Plywood.

Choice 2 : I let him there

I keep Mr. Plywood.

I love him, he is like a son to me! I can now be fulfilled, asking money to bystander for the rest of my Life.

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Mr. Plywood

I let him there.

I didn't pick the dog, I am sad and miserable, I will wait on the street until my sweet death.

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Death

I am now a local Hero.

I stopped the criminals and saved two old ladies during the robbery, people see me as a real police officer. The S.P.V.M is offering me a job, I don't know what it is, should I take it?

Choice 1 : I accept the offer

Choice 2 : Refuse the offer

They fooled me!

The job they offered me was as a mascot, they Said thats all I ever was! One fat mascot. I will retire as one then.

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Not today!

I refused the job offer. While waling home, I finded a lotery ticket, it is the jackpot, I am now millionaire!

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money

I ran for my Life.

I ditched my uniform and ran home, one of my collegue saved the Day, he was rewarded with a big check, i was fired, I will probably lose my house now.

Choice 1 : The end

house

Jail and more Jail.

I was not fast enough, officers tackled me to the ground, I must serve 15 years now.

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Jail

Guilty your honor.

I plead guilty for fraud and received 10 years of prison. At the end of my sentences I not out and died while jaywalking home.

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person walking

S.P.V.M.

I decided to apply at S.P.V.M and not accepted, which precinct should I choose now?

Choice 1 : I choose the 38

Choice 2 : I choose PDQ 21

PDQ 38.

Mont-royal it is, I will have my hands full, with homelessness and mental Health issues. There is a call for a desorganized male, white, 20 years old. He is troubling peace by yelling. Should I take it?

Choice 1 : I ignore the callout

Choice 2 : I take the call

PDQ 38

Somebody will take it?

Nobody Took the call, the man killed two bystander, every officer on your team not blame. You are now suffering from alchoolism.

Write a choice here.

Police squat car

PDQ 21.

I choose the PDQ 21, Downtown montreal, I should see plenty of action. Should I go walk in the Area and get to know the citizens?

Choice 1 : Yes, walking is great!

Choice 2 : No, I don't have the time

I am visiting local markets alone.

As soon as I stepped foot outside, I was shot multiple times by local gang members. I died of my injuries days later.

Choice 1 : The End

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Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

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I need to finish my reports.

I don't have the time, I need those reports done by the end of my shift. I hear gunshots, gang members are shooting outside, what a chance I am inside! Should I go outside and shootback?

Choice 1 : Yes, they need me

Choice 2 : I need to finish my reports.

I shooted back and died.

I went outside and tried to fireback, but they hited me twice, I was declared dead on the spot.

Choice 1 : The end

Bullet holes

I take the call in a curry.

I Took the radio and annonce that I, 38-2, would respond to the call. When I arrived, the men was calmed, he was not screaming anymore. I warned him and went back without arresting him. Later in the night, the same men killed two person. I am in shock, should I go see a psychologist?

Choice 1 : Noooo, I am fine!

Choice 2 : I see the psychologist.

I was not fine.

I regret, I should have seen the psychologist, I am now depress. While listening to STAN from Eminem, I drove my car under a bridge.

Choice 1 : The end

I go see the psychologist.

I went to the psychologist, he helped me a lot, with this regular help, I had a 25 year long career.

Choice 1 : The end

Retirement

More towards north.

I Applied at the sureté du Québec and was hired. 3 months on the job, I received a call related to a drug deal in Progress. They could leave at anypoint. Should I hurry?

Choice 1 : I go fast

Choice 2 : I enter slowly

Drug bust

Hurry up!

I went so fast, I enter the wrong house, got scared and shot a random men. They accused me of homide, I must now serve minimum 25 years in prison.

Choice 1 : The End

Slow and steady.

I decided to take my time, I went in and they were exchanging the drug. I arrested them all and received multiple awards.

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medals

Give this section a short title.

I lied and told them they could put out a fire in a circuit panel with water. They tried and we Lost a good one. I Lost my job.

Choice 1 : The End

Firefigther

I cannot lie to them.

I told them the truth.

Write a choice here.