My-business-story

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Word count: 585

Choice count: 12

Section count: 9

Image count: 8

Error count: 41

Field Related Analysis

Education : 33 matches

(choice, college, degree, don, grade, high school, homework, knowledge, learn, learning, school, university)

Business : 24 matches

(administration, bankrupt, business, company, distribution, money, partners, pay)

Sociology : 13 matches

(distribution, friendship, game, homework, school, small)

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My-business-story

Welcome to the big world.

I've just ended high school, big decision are coming and the future is great! I don't really know what to do in life but I do know something, I want to be great and have my own business!

Choice 1 : Learn more and think about what i really want to do

Choice 2 : Start my own small business to acquire experience.

Learning or experience.

I feel like going to school is way to important and i know deeply that if don't do it now i'll never do it later. My parent always did support me to go to school because it develop contact, friendship and some more knowledge.

Choice 1 : Keep going into school even if it's hard and a lot of work

Choice 2 : Now it's time, i feel more ready than ever and i want to pursue my dream

Start my own small business to acquire experience.

It was probably not the good, not enough knowledge, money and knowledge to start it up at this age, i've notice that it's as easy as I thought to run a business especially when you start from scratch. I ran out of money and i basicly bankrupt...

Choice 1 : Go back to beginning and choose a better option

Now it's time!

It was probably not the good choice, not enough knowledge, money and knowledge to start it up at this age, i've notice that it's as easy as I thought to run a business especially when you start from scratch. I ran out of money and i basicly bankrup.

Choice 1 : Go back to beginning and choose a better option

Next Step.

I've now ended College, i'm planning to go in administration at University but I'm exhausted of doing homework and study, I deeply know it will pay off somehow. On the other hand, one of my friend proposed me a business idea to run with to more friend but I'm a little bit skeptical, it's a lot of risk!

Choice 1 : Try something with my friends, risk is part of the game

Choice 2 : Go to university and specialise myself more into the business world

Getting closer.

I'm finally done with university, i have a degree in administration and i feel like it's my time, i've wait for this time for a long time and i want to make my dream come true finally!

Choice 1 : Start my own professionnal business and apply all my knowledge into it

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Learning of our errors is part of the game.

Unfortunetly, it was probably not the good path, we were not commited and ran out of idea, friendship problem and money distribution issue!

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning and start a new path

Finally!!!

I've started my business! I am so happy about it, every year and efforts I've put into school and trying hard to get good grade finally pay off. My company is also pretty successful, I've made a lot of money, new friends and partners, every day I wake up with the urge to get better and make my business grows!

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Not what i expected.

This was defnitely not what i expected, i don't want to be working for someone even if i like my job, i want to be the creator of my success...

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning and start a new path