A trip to America.

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Juanita Adjetey

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Word count: 1033

Choice count: 31

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis

Education : 41 matches

(attendance, behaviour, choice, don, first, knowledge, management, market, school, university)

Business : 32 matches

(business, ceo, company, leads, management, market, meeting, money, offer, president, salespeople, salesperson, service)

Tourism : 23 matches

(airways, alcohol, bar, bit, driver, hotel)

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A trip to America.

New life!

Congratulations! You have finally graduated from Collège Ahuntsic in business management. You don't know if you want to go to university or to enter the job market pursue your dreams as a salesperson for JetBlue Airways. Nevertheless, two choices are available to you.

Choice 1 : Work for JetBlue Airways in America.

Choice 2 : Go to University Of Montreal.

Graduation

America, here in come!

Great! You have arrived and, you have met all the salespeople from the Jetblue Airways company. Tomorrow you have your first important meeting with the CEO of the company. Since, you are a bit nervous, your coworkers are inviting you to hang out with them. They offer you only one option.

Choice 1 : Go with them to the bar.

American Flag

Fun night.

You're really having a great time, but it is getting kind of late. You have a very important meeting in the morning that you cannot miss. The guys are insisting you to stay so that they could get a chance to know you better.

Choice 1 : Stay with them.

Choice 2 : Leave the bar.

At the bar with friends

Fitting in with the guys.

Wow! Your co-workers are really interesting. They also love your personality. Maybe after all, it was wasn't a bad idea staying a bit longer. They offer you to have another drink.

Choice 1 : Take another drink.

Choice 2 : Politely refuse the drink.

Drink

Time flies.

Oops! It's already 1 a.m. You didn't see time go by because are having an amazing time with your new friends. Suddenly, you're feeling a bit drunk from all the alcohol. You are trying to leave, but it seems like you can't walk properly. So, you're thinking about waiting on your friends, so that they could get you back to the hotel.

Choice 1 : Fall asleep at the bar because you're tired.

Choice 2 : Drink water to sober up.

time flies

Bad people.

Oh no... You fell asleep at the bar, and your friends left you there. It's 6:30 a.m. and, your meeting is in 30 minutes! You're an hour away from your workplace so, you try to get there as soon as possible.

Choice 1 : Quickly call a taxi.

Choice 2 : Take the subway that leads you directly to your workplace.

Running late

Stupid traffic.

The traffic is crazy this morning. Unfortunately, you are late to meet the CEO of the company. Suddenly, your phone rings...

Choice 1 : Pick up the phone.

traffic

Bye bye America.

You answer the phone, and it's the CEO. He said that your behaviour is unprofessional and that you might not be a great fit to work for them. You now have to pack your things and go home. But it is never too late to try again.

Choice 1 : Start over.

sad at the airport

Party pooper.

Unfortunately, your co-workers think that you are lame for leaving the bar early. You feel bad because you actually wanted to make new friends.

Choice 1 : Your mind has been changed. You decide to stay.

Choice 2 : Leave the bar.

Party pooper

Should I stay or should I go?

After you have politely refused their drink, and getting to know them, you explain to them that it is time for you to leave because you have an important meeting in the morning. They insist you to stay because they want to get closer to you. So, you say:

Choice 1 : Staying longer won't hurt anybody

Choice 2 : This meeting is important. I must go.

Should I stay or should I go

Cheers to new friendships.

Your new friends completely understand your choice. They thank you for staying, and they hope you get back to your hotel safely.

Choice 1 : Walk back to the hotel

Choice 2 : Call a taxi

Guys cheering their drinks at the bar

Accidents happen.

Oh...no! There's been a huge accident because the taxi driver was on his cell phone. The car has crashed into a tree. This is not how you wanted your business trip to go. Choose another way to get back to the hotel.

Choice 1 : Try again

taxi crash

Feeling better.

After drinking water for the past hour, you definitely feel sober enough to leave the bar on your own. You need to go rest for the big day tomorrow.

Choice 1 : Tell your friends that you're leaving.

Man looking at himself in the mirror

Out of service.

The subway is out of service this morning. Please chose another to get around.

Choice 1 : Choose again.

Out of service subway

Lucky night.

Lucky you! While you were walking to get to your hotel, you happened to find a 100 dollar bill on the ground!

Choice 1 : Take the money, and keep walking.

Choice 2 : You're feeling generous. Leave the money for someone else.

100 bill on the ground

Finally made it!

Great! You finally made it back to your hotel. Now you can prepare yourself for the meeting and go to sleep early. But you are thinking about your co-workers.

Choice 1 : Give them a call.

Choice 2 : Go to sleep. They're having fun anyway.

hotel room

Wonderful news!

On this wonderful morning, you met CEO of JetBlue Airways. He was disappointed because your co-workers were supposed to attend this meeting, but you couldn't tell him that they spent the night at the bar. He is well-pleased with your attendance, and he would like to promote you to be the president of the salesperson department. CONGRATULATIONS!

Choice 1 : The end

Employees giving handshakes

Straight to voicemail.

You called three times, and they are not answering. You are hoping that everything is going well. What should you do?

Choice 1 : Call again

Choice 2 : You don't think much of it.

Voicemail image

Ah...relief!

They finally answered. They assure you that they are okay even though they had a lot to drink. They'll take an Uber to get back home. At least you know that they are fine. It's getting late, the meeting is in 9 hours.

Choice 1 : Go to bed.

feeling a sense of relief

Ready for life.

You are officially done with school. You have graduated from University of Montreal after 3 years. You feel that you have gained enough knowledge, and experience to enter the job market. Your one and only dream job is waiting for you.

Choice 1 : Go to America to be a salesperson.