Ophthalmologist or Paramedic.

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Ophthalmologist or Paramedic.

Start here.

I'm about to start college, and I'm stressed and scared about it. I don't know what I want to do or where I want to go!

Choice 1 : Go to Rosemont College.

Choice 2 : Go to Ahuntsic College.

High School

Rosemont College.

I know a friend who's going to school here, maybe I'll be able to see her sometimes, and study with her. I'm excited to start studying Healt and Sciences. Let's see how it goes!

Choice 1 : Do the midterms exams.

Choice 2 : Leave the program.

Choice 3 : Transfer to Ahuntsic College.

Rosemont College

Ahuntsic College.

I'm scared to start studying here. I actually am kind of skeptical towards college. I don't have any friends, it's going to be so lonely... at least the Paramedic program looks fun. I hope it will go well!

Choice 1 : Do the midterms.

Choice 2 : Leave the program.

Choice 3 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Ahuntsic College

Midterms.

Ouch.... midterms are so rough and hard!! I don't have straight A's yet...it is not looking good for me.

Choice 1 : Start here.

Choice 2 : Finish the first semester.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

Choice 4 : Transfer to Ahuntsic College.

Exams

First semester done.

That was something! All the teachers, classes and exams... I can't do it...I don't even like those classes, they are so boring. Plus, I failed two classes, it is so maddening. I don't want to do it not anymore...

Choice 1 : Start here.

Choice 2 : Transfer to Ahuntsic College.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

Exams

Midterms.

Well, that wasn't easy, it is pretty though actually...but once I see my mistakes, I will be able not to do them again. At least I like my classes.

Choice 1 : Finish the first semester.

Choice 2 : Start here.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

Choice 4 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Exams

First semester done.

Finally all the exams are done for now. It was kind of nice actually. All those classes are fun, and I make some friends too. Can't wait for next semester, but I need some expensive things for the program I should be working. A salary can help me with this.

Choice 1 : Start here.

Choice 2 : Do the second semester.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

Choice 4 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Exams

Second semester done and so is the first year.

Ok, so... I've tried working while having nine classes, and now I failed one of those... that is one more year added to my parkour, but I will still need the money, so I need to keep the job that I have. I'm not a trainee anymore, and the wage is kind of good for a student.

Choice 1 : Start here.

Choice 2 : Finish the program.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

Choice 4 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Exams

End of the paramedic program.

Well, that was tough, but I kept working, and studying, and I survived! With the money I did while I was working, I was able to get everything I needed for the program. That was amazing!! Some friends had finished school last year, some of them finish the program today just like me, and some of them will finish next year. At least we may work together!

Choice 1 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Choice 2 : Start here.

Choice 3 : Choose the company that you will work for.

Choice 4 : Quit school.

Paramedics

The next years you will spend as a paramedic.

There I am, choosing where I will be working, where I will do my job interview, where I will be an intern, where I will do an OJT. I really can go anywhere, and work for anyone. I mean there are twelve companies that I can work for only in the province of Quebec. I don't know where I want to go...but I will decide soon. Not today but soon.

Choice 1 : Quit everything.

Choice 2 : Transfer to Rosemont College.

Choice 3 : The END.

Paramedics

Quitting.

I really want to quit... but I can't. I got to get going and do something successful. I want to be proud of myself. If I quit all of that, it would have been for nothing. So, I want to, but I can't...

Choice 1 : Start here.

Choice 2 : Go to Rosemont College.

Choice 3 : Go to Ahuntsic College.

Choice 4 : The END.

quitting