Paramedic Program First Day.
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Word count: 821
Choice count: 39
Section count: 27
Image count: 27
Error count: 14
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Paramedic Program First Day.
Where it all began.
It all start at my first day at Ahuntsic College. I’m 17 years old and just finished high school. I am so excited to go in. It is 7:45 a.m. and my first class starts at 8 a.m.
Choice 1 : Go to my Biology class.
Go to my Biology class.
The class is so big. I don’t know where to go sit.
Choice 1 : Sit in the front.
Choice 2 : Sit in the back.
Sit in the front.
I will listen better if I’m in front.
Choice 1 : Listen carefully to your teacher.
Sit in the back.
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Choice 1 : Talk to the friend beside you.
Listen carefully to your teacher.
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Choice 1 : Go eat lunch in the cafeteria.
Choice 2 : Go eat in your car.
Talk to the friend beside you.
It’s fun to make a new friend.
Choice 1 : Go back home because you’re tired.
Choice 2 : Go to your next class.
Go eat lunch in the cafeteria.
Maybe, I will be able to make new friends.
Choice 1 : 1 year later.
Choice 2 : 6 months later.
Go eat in your car.
Eating in the car will let me relax a little bit.
Choice 1 : 1 year later.
Choice 2 : 6 months later.
Go back home because you’re tired.
I’m so tired, I need to go sleep at home.
Choice 1 : 1 year later.
Choice 2 : 6 months later.
Go to your next class.
I need to go fast to my next class.
Choice 1 : 1 year later.
Choice 2 : 6 months later.
1 year later.
I failed this year, I need to start fresh this year and be able to succeed.
Choice 1 : Restart again a new semester.
Choice 2 : Change program.
6 months later.
It’s already the next semester. I fail Biology I need to be more focus.
Choice 1 : Try hard for winter semester.
Choice 2 : Party and have fun with your boyfriend and friends.
Restart again a new semester.
A new start with a clear head is the best.
Choice 1 : Study hard for Biology.
Choice 2 : Study hard for French.
Change program.
I think being a paramedic is not for me. I need to think about my future.
Choice 1 : Try a new program.
Choice 2 : Stay home and do nothing.
Try hard for winter semester.
This semester I will need to pay more attention in class. I need to focus to succeed.
Choice 1 : Study hard for Biology.
Party and have fun with your boyfriend and friends.
I need to have fun before having to work for the rest of my life.
Choice 1 : Oh, non, I fail all my class because I wasn’t studying enough.
Study hard for Biology.
Biology is what I need so focus on to be able to do my other class.
Choice 1 : Pass all my program class.
Study hard for French.
If I improve my French skills, maybe I will be able to understand better my other class.
Write a choice here.
Fail to succeed in life.
I don’t know what to do of my life. Maybe, I will now soon what I’m supposed to do with my life.
Choice 1 : Where it all began.
Excel in Firefighter program.
I think I wasn’t fit to be a paramedic. Being a firefighter is what I was supposed to be.
Choice 1 : Where it all began.
Pass all my program class.
Now, it’s time for me to choose what company I will be working for the next 20 years.
Choice 1 : Go to URS.
Choice 2 : Go to SPLL.
Go to URS.
This is my home! I’m so excited to start this new chapter of my life.
Choice 1 : Where it all began.
Go to SPLL.
This is my home! I’m so excited to start this new chapter of my life.
Choice 1 : Where it all began.
Oh, non, I was to focus on my French class. Now, I fail my Biology class again.
Maybe focusing only in my French wasn’t a good idea when à have so much class.
Choice 1 : Try a new program.
Choice 2 : Stay home and do nothing.
Oh, non, I fail all my class because I wasn’t studying enough.
I should have paid more attention to my studies.
Choice 1 : Fail to succeed in life.
