Write-your-own-story-Daniel-

A hypertext narrative by

Daniel Nguyen

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Word count: 1289

Choice count: 34

Section count: 23

Image count: 23

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis

Education : 89 matches

(behaviour, choice, class, classes, college, diploma, don, down, fail, first, grades, graduate, head, high school, homework, learned, learning, market, performance, school, teacher, university)

Law : 26 matches

(arrested, cause, duty, executive, fine, house, incompetence, market, maturity, month, mortgage, notice, option, parent, parties, pressing)

Food and catering : 26 matches

(alcohol, black, burn, chain, coffee, dad, flat, fries, happy, option, restaurant)

Target Structure: (12 matches)

come in handy (1 match)

drawback (1 match)

intern (4 matches)

internship (1 match)

interns (1 match)

learning the ropes (1 match)

learned the ropes (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

pension (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (8 matches)

straight a's (1 match)

The end of high school.

Finally, after 5 years of studying with two years totally confined, I finally graduated from Joseph-François Perrault High School! Now, I have to go on SRAM and pick my college and my orientation or I'm finishing schooling for now. What will it be my choice?

Choice 1 : Go to Ahuntsic College in Natural Sciences : Pure and Applied Sciences.

Choice 2 : Finish schooling and do nothing.

Go to Ahuntsic College in Natural Sciences : Pure and Applied Sciences.

I decided it to pick Ahuntsic College and picked the program Natural Sciences : Pure and Applied Sciences. I decided it to work hard and gets straight A's, so I could then apply to university to pursue engineering. Right now, homework starts to pilling up. Should I start working on it or should I avoid homework?

Choice 1 : Do the homework.

Choice 2 : Not doing the homework.

Finish schooling and do nothing.

I decided to slack off after graduating from high school and do nothing. Right now, I have nothing. My dad owns a restaurant with my mom. They asked me if I should come worked with them. Should I start working with them or should I find myself a job?

Choice 1 : Start working for my parents.

Choice 2 : Look for a job.

Do the homework.

I decided to do the homework. It was hard at beginning, but by working hard, I managed to enhance my performance placing myself first of my class. Because of my hard work, I got recommended working for an engineering firm as an intern. Should I take it or should I go to university first?

Choice 1 : Take the recommandation.

Choice 2 : Go to university.

Not doing the homework.

I decided not the homework. Right now, I have nothing complete and my grades are falling flat. My teacher is mad at me, and he asked me to put an effort in it. Should I listen to him or not?

Choice 1 : Listen to my teacher.

Choice 2 : Not listening to him.

Start working for my parents.

I started to work at my parent's restaurant. Instead of helping them, my laziness turns the restaurant into a zoo. I was a drawback in the restaurant and my parents thought that my only purpose here was to cause troubles. I got kicked from the restaurant and my parent's house. I am now homeless.

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Found a job.

I managed to find a job at McDonald's. Everything was going fine. I quickly learned the ropes pretty easily. One day, while on fries duty, I accidentally cut my bag over the sink, causing the fries to fall into the water. Although I managed to grab them back, I'm hesitating whether I should put them into the fryer. Should I put them in or not?

Choice 1 : Put the fries in the fryer.

Choice 2 : Don't put the fries in the fryer.

Taking the recommandation.

I decided to take the recommendation, and I became an intern for an engineering firm. I try come in handy the most out of the interns, but as an intern, I got stuck to bring out coffee to my coworkers instead of learning the ropes. One day, I brought a coffee in the main room but no one was there. Then, I notice a big red button. Should I press it or not?

Choice 1 : Pressing the red button.

Choice 2 : Not pressing the red button.

Going to university.

After graduating from Ahuntsic College, by working hard, I manage to get good grades, and I could apply to Polytechnique Montreal. I am going to become an engineer. For that, I need to attend all of my classes or else I will fail, but my friends suggested to me to go to parties for alcohol and for girls. Should I attend my classes or should I attend parties?

Choice 1 : Attend the classes.

Choice 2 : Attend the parties.

Not listening to him.

I decide to not listen to my teacher and not do my homework. Therefore, my grades started to go down, and I got expelled from school.

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Put the fries in the fryer.

The McDonald's got burn down from my mistake and everybody got fired from my work. The police is still looking for the culprit, but I will never reveal myself. Pro tip : NEVER PUT WET FRIES IN THE FRYER!

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Don't put the fries in the fryer.

I did the right thing to not put the wet fries in the fryer and continued my job. After a few years of working under the chain, I manage to receive a job as executive manager from the company. I was really happy, but I wish to go back to school, so I will get a diploma and get an even better job. Still, working there was a wonderful experience.

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Pressing the red button.

I decide to press the red button. Unfortunately, this red button was linked to a nuclear bomb. The countdown was going, and I try everything to fix it, but nothing happened. Life on planet Earth has been destroyed due to my incompetence and my stupidity.

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Not pressing the red button.

I decide not to press the red button. Therefore, my maturity has been showcased to my employer. He was really happy to see me work as an intern and would love to see me back as a full employee. I am now going to university after the internship.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Attend the classes.

I decide to attend the classes and not go to parties. I was very attentive during class, and I did well during assignments. Now, I am about to graduate, and I am going on the job market. Should I work for NASA or Tesla?

Choice 1 : Work for NASA.

Choice 2 : Work for Tesla.

Attend the parties.

I decide to attend the parties. Unfortunately, I got peer pressure and started drinking a lot. After, I became very obnoxious and start to harass people. Because of my behaviour, the police came and arrested me. I will now serve 3 years in prison because of my actions.

Choice 1 : TRY AGAIN

Work for NASA.

I am now working for Nasa. I decide to stay here till retirement...

Choice 1 : Head to retirement.

Work for Tesla.

I am now working for Tesla. I decide to stay here till retirement...

Choice 1 : Head to retirement.

Retirement.

I am currently retiring. I have accumulated a lot of money and pension money is coming to me each month. My mortgage has already been paid, but I want to make a deal with the devil. I want to put everything on the roulette at a casino. Should I do it or retire normally?

Choice 1 : Enjoy retirement.

Choice 2 : Head to the casino.