A possible futur, who really knows

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Jeremi thibault

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Word count: 1166

Choice count: 15

Section count: 11

Image count: 11

Error count: 46

Field Related Analysis:

Psychology : 17 matches (alienation, chromatic, chromatic vision, class, concept, depression, deuteranomaly, field, love, mental illnesses, need, profile, psychologist, self, shock, subject, vision)

Education : 16 matches (School, choice, class, college, courses, field, first, homework, market, portfolio, project, reader, school, teacher, university, vision)

Nursing : 14 matches (alienation, body, admission, depression, media, MI, plaster, practice, psychologist, rejection, sensitive, sensitivity, shock, sick)

Target Structure:

alienation (1 match)

overwhelm (1 match)

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A possible futur, who really knows

A choice to make

The beginning.

My name is Jérémi and I’m in visuals arts in Montmorency College. I really like what I’m doing in this program and I decided that I wanted to be an artist or an art teacher. I decided to search for the university than could take me in and I found only one that offered these programs. U.Q.A.M (Quebec University in Montreal) was a good university and I found that I wanted to do both of them but my budget didn’t allow me to do that so I had to choose. Did I want to do “visual and media art: teaching of visual and media arts profil” or did I want to do “visual and media art: artistic practice profil” or both of them?

Choice 1 : Do both of them

Choice 2 : Do "Visual and media arts: artistic pratice profile"

Choice 3 : Do "Visual and media arts: teaching of visual and media arts profile"

Tired...

Doing both of them, what a bad idea!

I began in autumn 2019 and It was really easy in the first time. I made friends and I used to do my homework in time. But in the midterm, I started to feel overwhelm by excessive homework and my part time job and love. I started to feel sick and I decided to go see a psychologist because i wasn’t feeling great at all. My psychologist diagnosed me with depression and I ought to drop school and job to heal. My “R” cote became so bad when I quit my school and because of that no University wanted me back. I had to go on the job market and finally found a job in Mc Donald.

Choice 1 : Working in Mac donald

Tired...

The end (1).

I worked in Mac Donald for the rest of my life and because I was too poor, I didn’t retire until I got sick again. I didn't have a couple life so I ended up alone in the end.

Choice 1 : Take another path?

teacher

Entering in Visual and media art: teaching of visual and media arts profil.

I chose to go to U.Q.A.M in the teaching branch because I found that it soothed me more than just being an artist, I wanted to do something concrete in my starting life. Entering in the program was hard because the program was contingent and I needed to have seventy percent in my art portfolio to be accepted in it but, after a few weeks; I finally received the school’s answer and freaked out when I read the respond.

Choice 1 : Positive Answer

Choice 2 : Negative Answer

COOL!

An enjoyable moment.

I opened the letter and took off the paper that was in the enveloppe. I read it: "20144****6 - Thibault, Jérémi, Mrs, Sir, We are pleased to inform you that your application for admission to University of Quebec in Montreal in the following program is accepted: Visual and Media Arts: Teaching of Visual and Media Arts Profile". I screamed with joy, I told my mom and we had a good moment together. My entry in this program was great, and I finally found myself in this program. My courses were fun and I could express myself without hesitations. For my art class, I had to do a project with a certain restriction, the theme was "The spirit, the mind". The style were your choice and the subject of matter was also my choice. I know that I wasn't really good at drawing because drawing was never in my hobbies. Painting wasn't a good idea either because I was colorblind, more specifically, I was suffering from Deuteranomaly, which is a type of anomalous Tri-chromatic vision in which the second, green-sensitive, cones have a decreased sensitivity. I was good at sculpture because it didn't need colors, and I was good at 3 dimensional work . So, the choice was easy, I chose:

Choice 1 : A sculpture project

Choice 2 : A drawing project

Choice 3 : A painting project

crying

What a deception!

I opened the letter and took off the paper that was in the enveloppe. I read it: "20144****6 - Thibault, Jérémi, Mrs, Sir, We are sorry to inform you that your application for admission to University of Quebec in Montreal in the following program is denied: Visual and Media Arts: Teaching of Visual and Media Arts Profile". I screamed, in shock… I didn't know what to do. I told my mom about my rejection, and she told me that this was normal and to try again in another program.

Choice 1 : Try in the art branch.

mister the artist

Entering in the art field.

I chose to go to U.Q.A.M in the Art branch because I found that this soothed me more than just being a teacher and teaching about art, I wanted to do something concrete in my starting life, I wanted to create! Entering in the program was hard because the program was contingent and I needed to have fifty percent in my art portfolio to be accepted in it but, after a few weeks; I finally received the school’s answer and freaked out when I read the answer.

Choice 1 : A positive answer

Choice 2 : A negative answer

crying

A deception.

I opened the letter and took off the paper that was in the enveloppe. I read it: "20144****6 - Thibault, Jérémi, Mrs, Sir, We are sorry to inform you that your application for admission to University of Quebec in Montreal in the following program is denied: Visual and Media Arts: Art pratice Profile". I screamed, in shock… I didn't know what to do. I told my mom about my rejection, and she told me that this was normal and to try again in another program. I chose to not complete my school path and went to directly to the work market.

Choice 1 : Working in Mac Donald

joy

It's a yes!

the letter said that I was accepted in the program! I was so happy! A month passed and I finally had a homework to do but I didn't know what to do. Did I wanted to do a painting, a sculpture, or a drawing, or even a mix of all of that? My partner wanted to do a sculpture with an excellent concept and I really became jaleous of him so I...

Choice 1 : overcame with a better idea!

Bipolarity

Overcome with a better idea!

I overcame with a better idea than him. I decided to make a sculpture composed of part of my body made from plaster cast of my limbs, embellished with spun pictures of myself representing various mental illnesses. The concept was representing mental illnesses that cause self-destruction and total alienation. The idea was so good that my teacher was very impressed of me.

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I stole his idea.

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The End.