Story of my life

A hypertext narrative by

Marianne Tremblay

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Word count: 2075

Choice count: 43

Section count: 44

Image count: 44

Error count: 11

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 21 matches (accused, alibi, close, director, drugs, fact, four, harassment, House, issue, living, notice, office, Principal, private, security, seller, Sexual, street, term, truth)

Education : 20 matches (School, choice, classes, classmates, college, don, field, field of study, first, learning, principal, private, project, reader, school, students, teacher, teachers, term, university)

Nursing : 19 matches (ankle, body, cream, director, environment, exercise, hospital, impression, muscle, nutrition, pain, parameter, solution, TOT, TV, sick, patients, treat, chemistry)

Target Structure:

cursory (1 match)

intern (2 matches)

internship (3 matches)

more often than not (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

thoroughly (1 match)

though (1 match)

wage (1 match)

How it all started.

After my four years of hard work at Montmorency College, I can now say that I'm ready to start working as a dietician. Even if I'm done with my College program, It's really important for me to continue my studies in University. I would like to improve my learning in nutrition or in food chemistry.

Choice 1 : Study in nutrition

Choice 2 : Study in food chemistry

Study in nutrition.

This field of study wasn't what I was expecting it to be. I like all of my classmates but there's a lot of work to do and I don't have any free time for myself. Also, I need to find an internship for my final project. It's either I'm going to a hospital to treat patients or at a school where I would have to do some formation.

Choice 1 : Going to a hospital

Choice 2 : Going to a school

Study in food chemistry.

All of my classes are really interesting but I can't imagine myself working in an office every day. I wasn't expecting my salary to be that good though and I need to buy a car or an apartment to be closer of the school.

Choice 1 : Buy a car

Choice 2 : Buy an apartment

Going to a hospital.

It's great working here even if it's difficult to manage my emotions. It's not always easy with patients that are really sick and not actually happy to be there. Even if I'm just an intern, I know that my employer has a lot of confidence in me and I don't want to disappoint him. Today he asked me for lunch, but I was supposed to go to the gym with a friend.

Choice 1 : Lunch with my employer

Choice 2 : Go to the gym

Going to a school.

I was sent to a private school and I have to talk with kids about their alimentation. I have to make them understand the importance of good food in their lives as students. I like the fact that kids are respectful with me but I realize that some teacher doesn't really want me there. Should I tell the principal about it or just go see the teacher individually?

Choice 1 : Tell the principal

Choice 2 : Go see the teacher individually

Buy a car.

I finally decided to go bought a car. The seller wants to convince me that it was a good idea to put a little bit more money for something much better. Even if I have a good amount of money, it was not enough for the car I really want to have. But then I think about some money that I have put aside for my studies.

Choice 1 : Buy a cheaper car

Choice 2 : Take the money for my studies

Buy an apartment.

I found the perfect apartment for me. It's really close to the University and I don't have to worry about traffic no more. A week after I moved there I started notice that a weird smell was going all around the apartment. I decided to go check if my neighbor have the same issue but when I knock on his door nobody answered me. The door was unlocked. Inside of the apartment I discovered a dead body.

Choice 1 : Call the police.

Choice 2 : Hide the dead body

Lunch with my employer.

We decided to have lunch not too far from the hospital. He asked me questions about my final project and what were my projects for the future. But when we were on our way back to the hospital, he tried to put his hand on my butt. I was so anxious and I didn't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Talk with my teacher about my employer

Choice 2 : Talk to my employer

Go to the gym.

It's been a while since I begin my studies in nutrition that I have the time to go to the gym. My friend trains himself 5 days a week. Even if I'm not as good as him, I want to follow his routine. I tried some new exercise but I ended up loose all control of myself and fell. My ankle was hurting me so bad.

Choice 1 : Go back to work at the hospital

Choice 2 : Call my employer

Tell the principal.

I took a deep breath and told the principal how I felt about the owl situation. He explains to me that it was because of the competition between each department and they were afraid of me taking theirs places. I am not sure if want to stay in this environment. I think I need a break.

Choice 1 : Stop my internship and travel

Choice 2 : Go work for my uncle

Go see the teacher individually.

One of the teachers of the school was particularly rude with me. I decided to confront him on lunch-time. At first, he was surprised. I think he realizes how I really felt. He started to being nice and understand why I was actually there. I'm not sure, but I think he's now flirting with me.

Choice 1 : Flirt with him

Choice 2 : Explain that I'm not interesting

Buy a cheaper car.

As I started using my car, I can hear terrible sounds coming straight from the engine. I have to go to my mom's house but as I crossed the first street, the car completely stop working.

Choice 1 : Call my ex for help

Choice 2 : Go see a neighbour

Take the money for my studies.

Now that I bought a new car I don't have any money left to pay for my studies. I'm getting old and my parents don't want me to stay for a very long time. I need to make fast money.

Choice 1 : Sell drugs

Choice 2 : Steal money from my brother's girlfriend

Call the police.

The purpose of the officer was clear. They first wanted to establish a parameter of security. They ask me a lot of questions about my journey. I have watch TV in my apartment, alone. My alibi was really bad.

Choice 1 : Lie about my day

Choice 2 : Tell the truth

Hide the dead body.

I decided to hide the body because I don't want to be accused. I'm not in a good term with this neighbour and I'm also the one found the body. I have no idea of what I'm doing but I need to find a solution.

Choice 1 : Call my cousin for help

Choice 2 : Hide it in the basement

Talk with my teacher about my employer.

My teacher doesn't want to hear anything about this incident. She knows personally the employer of the hospital. She thinks I need attention and that I don't want to finish my intern because I'm lazy. She decided to give me a zero.

Choice 1 : Go back to school

Choice 2 : Go see the director of my program

Talk to my employer.

Talking to him was a huge mistake. He started to accuse me of sexual harassment on his person. He said that he would talk to my teacher about it. I'm so confused and frustrated.

Choice 1 : Make excuses to him

Choice 2 : Kill him

Go back to work at the hospital.

It was the worst day in my life. I was suffering but I need to take care of my patients. At the end of the day, the pain was unbearable.

Choice 1 : Stay at the hospital for the night

Choice 2 : Buy a cream for muscle pain

Call my employer.

I told him that I was not able to make it. Turns out that he totally understand. My friend proposes me to go at his house. I'm trying to get this invitation for so long.

Choice 1 : Kiss him

Choice 2 : Go to his house

Stop my internship and travel.

I went to Bulgaria by myself. I have met a lot of new people. I decided to stay longer than I was supposed to. I have the impression of living in a cursory. I'm also in a relationship. He just asked me to marry him.

Choice 1 : Say yes to the proposal

Choice 2 : Say no tot the proposal

Go work for my uncle.

My uncle owns a store of jewelry. I decided to take a break of my field of study. My wage isn't comparable but I like everything about this new job. I have a lot of responsibilities and I just found out that someone stole. I need to fix the situation.

Choice 1 : Call the police

Choice 2 : Check the camera

Flirt with him.

I think he's a really interesting guy. He stills a little bit old for me but I think I kind of like the fact he's more mature. He's pushing us really fast. He wants me to move with him.

Choice 1 : Move with him

Explain that I'm not interesting.

I decided to tell him that I wasn't intersted to have a relation while I still study. He was thoroughly surprised. He wants me to give him a chance.

Write a choice here.

Call my ex for help.

He cames so fast. When I need help he's always there for me even if I left him. I should have been kinder with him. More often than not I'm thinking of him.

Write a choice here.

Go see a neighbour.

I went to look for help in the house that were on the street. It seems like the old woman that open her door for me was drunk and call the police after me.

Write a choice here.