Midterm oral

Introduction

Welcome everyone! My name is Megan. I have been studying Medical Records Management for 2 years at Ahuntsic. For those of you who don’t know about Medical Records Management. It's a program with a lot of courses which teaches us how to properly work with confidential files. These courses also prepares us to word in the health sector.

Like you, I don't want to have embarrassing errors in my writing.

I am not an expert in English or the best student of my class, but I'm so much better than I was.

My grades have been increased since the discovery of a writing tool by my teacher.

My goal is to show you how benefit this website can be.

It'll only take 3 minutes of your time and you won't regret it.

You will be surprise by what you can do with the website I'm going to show you.

The Problem

When you are a Medical Records Manager, you have to write letters to patient. We have a limited time to answer, and we can't make mistakes.

When there are mistakes, you lose credibility, and can even make a bad impression.

Imagine that you have to tell a widow that she can't have access to the medical record of her deceased husband, and there are many errors in the letter.

That is a situation that we want to eliminate. I found a solution, and I am going to show you.

The Quest

First, open your browser. Type Virtual Writing Tutor into the address bar at the top of the screen and hit enter. If you typed the name of the website correctly, you will see this page.

In the top left corner, you can see the logo of the website. In the top right corner, you can see icons of social media were you can post your work. In the middle of the screen, there is a text area. In this area you can write and it will check your grammar. You can use the microphone button in the bottom right of the text area and it will write the words you say for you.

The Solution

So, before sending an email or a letter to someone, you can check your grammar right here and it will show you your errors.

The Conclusion

If you are in Medical Records Management of a field that communicates by writing, that's how you solve the problem of errors.

I hope that was useful to you so before sending something use the grammar checker of Virtual Writing Tutor to eliminate errors.

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Statistics

Word count: 421

Total MP3 length: 02:21

Target structure count: 10

Error count: 1

Error density: 1%